I mean personally the name isn't doing anything for me, however that isn't a huge contribution to the actual design, all I'm picturing though when you describe this champion is a male, or maybe androgynous version of zyra, due to the use of vines and plants being so similar, and the ult just remind me or Rek'sai naturally. Of course things could do with a little work and tweaking, however I dont think having a new non support zyra champ is a bad thing, the idea itself isn't at all bad and ravage is quite creative in my opinion, however you made it appear as if they had two passives? Just something I was confused by. If you can develop this and just take all criticism well, I'm sure you will create a great champion idea.
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Rakgnor (Rak-gnaw)
Passive - Undergrowth
After Rakgnor enters brush it will go stealthed until it attacks or uses abilities, or until rakgnor goes more than 450 range from brush. If enemy champions enter the 'source' brush (brush that allows stealth) Rakgnor is revealed.
Ravage -
Q - Sporic Assault - Cost 40 mana - Cool Down 10/9//8/7/6 - Skill Shot (600 Range)
Rakgnor Shoots a spore if it hits an enemy it deals 20/40/60/80/100 (+ 70 AD) in Physical damage to an enemy, it also slows them by 20% for 2 seconds.
[Applies A Mark Of Ravage]
W - Tangle Weeds - Cost 60 mana - Cool Down 15 (Max 2 Charges) - Trap (50 range)
Places a trap that when stepped on by an enemy champion, will drag them to the nearest brush, enemies are stunned for 0.5 seconds after that they can attack the spore 2 times to stop the pull. If Rakgnor auto attacks the target they are instantly dragged into the brush (Rakgnor getting pulled along with them).
[Applies A Mark Of Ravage]
E - Jungle Vines - Cost 80 - Cool Down 20/18/16/14/12 - Skill Shot (700 range)
Rakgnor sends out one of its vines dealing 30/60/90/120/150 (+ 80 AP) Magical damage to the target, if it kills the target for the next 3 (if minion) or 5 (Large Monster/Champion) auto attacks are ranged (550 range) but only deal 50% damage, these auto attacks doesn't proc Ravage.
R - Living Plants - Cost 120 mana - Cool Down 130/110/90 - Instant
Rakgnor burrows into the earth gaining stealth and 20% movement speed.
if Rakgnor can attack an enemy (melee form range) it will un-burrow from the ground, dealing a bonus 200/400/600 damage for that auto-attack.
If the enemy is below 400/600/800 health they are instantly killed and Rakgnor is unable to attack or cast Q or E for 3 seconds after killing the enemy, Rakgnor gains 20% bonus movespeed for the duration.
Ravage - This is a passive but is too much to put at the start
rakgnors next Auto attack on the target (for the next 20 seconds or until proced) deals a bonus 50 (+ 5 Per Level) also afterwards if the enemy is hit by:
Q - Applies blindness and slowing for an extra 20%
W - Gains bonus 200 Range (able to grab the target) also after the stun the target is silenced for 1 second
E - Pulls the target 500 Towards Rakgnor (if the target is 500 or below is just pulled infront of Rakgnor)
R - The Target is seen through the fog of war
Stats
Health - 535 (+43 per level)
Mana - 350 (+20 per level)
Armour - 37 (+ 5 per level)
Magic Resist - 25 (+5 per level)
Health Regeneration - 1 (+ 1 per level)
Mana Regeneration - 2 (+ 1 per level)
Attack Damage - 67 (+5 per level)
Attack Speed - 0.6 (+ 0.02 Per Level)
Attack Range - 175 (550 with E)