Legion, Gun for Hire

[quote=Sventes][b]EDITED 09/30/2012: Passive changed from old verison/ Lore Added.[/b] [b]Heyo Mobafire[/b] Sventes here with another custom Champion idea. This time I figured id take a shot at a form of counter carry, similar to Urgot. As always, feedback is appreciated on all aspects of the champ. [b]Legion, Gun for Hire[/b] Fighter, Anti-Carry Legion is a ranged anti carry that specilizes at weaking an opponents offense while still doing tons of damage. Passive: Time is Money: Whenever Legion gets a Kill, all gold he generates within the next 15 seconds is increased by 30%. This effect is halved for assists. [Q]: Crack Shot: Legions next auto attack gains 50 additional range. If a champion is struck, their armor and attack damage are reduced by 6/12/18/24/30 for the next 4 seconds. Range: 550 Base auto attack range = 600 Range crack shot, Cost: 45 mana, Cooldown: 6 seconds [W]: Caltrops: Legion throws a line of caltrops on the ground infront of him. Enemies standing in the caltrops take 30/45/60/75/90( 0.6 Bonus AD) Phycial damage each second and are slowed by 12/24/36/48/60%. This skill is aimed exactlly like Rumble's [The Equalizer] and Viktor's [Death Laser]. Range: 400 cast start/ 300 skill shot, Cost: 70 mana, Cooldown: 11 seconds [E]: Combat Training: Legion rolls a short distance. When he finishes the roll, Legion fires a shot at a nearby enemy unit( priortizes champions) for 60/80/100/120/140 ( 0.8 Total AD) physical damage. Combat Training's cooldown is reset if he gets a kill or assist. Range: 450 dash/ 550 shot range, Cost: 80 mana, Cooldown: 16 seconds [R]: Best Money Can Buy Passive: Legion loads special shrapnel rounds into his revolver, causing each auto attack to deal 25/50/75(0.5 Bonus AD) magic damage. Active: Legion gains 30/40/50 movement speed, 20/30/40 armor and magic resist for 6 seconds and causes his magic damage on his auto attacks to splash to enemey champions nearby his target. This ability's cooldown is reset upon kill or assist. Range: 200 splash Cost: None, Cooldown 50 seconds Lore: Legion was born to a poor family in the city streets of Noxus. His family was often forced to go days without food or water. Upon reaching the age of 10, Legion's parents lost their lives to a horrible plauge that was terrorizing the city of Noxus. Having to resort to theft and other violent crimes to survive, Legion developed a series of very impressive skills over his life, so much so that he gained notority within the Demacian political court.Afer multiple contracts that forced Legion to maim or kill Demacian nobles and bureacrats, Demacia considered him to be a threat that needed to be eliminated. Demacia contracted the services of Sivir the Battle Maiden, a famed mercenary in her own right, to assassinate Legion. Sivir found Legion in Demacia, attempting to finish a job of his own. The two entered a long and heated battle, with both of them sustaining severe injuries in the process. In the end, Legion managed to escape, leaving the fray with many an injury and open bounty on his head. Legion decided to go into hiding, moving from place to place, always staying 1 step ahead of Sivir, who was still hunting him. Eventaully he made his way to the League of Legends where he asked the head summoner to become a champion. He agreeded, and Legion was safe. At least, for a little while. [b]LEGION, WANTED FOR MURDER,ARSON,TORTURE,VANDALISM,MANSLAUGHTER,ANIMAL CREULTY,PROPERTY DAMAGE IN EXCESS OF 100,000$ AND NAME CALLING. KILL ON SIGHT.[/b] -Wanted poster by Demacian Royal Gaurd Look: Long Brown Trench coat, Bandoliers of Ammo, Combat Knives anging from belt, Large Barreled 6-shot revolver, Short Red hair.[/quote]

[quote=DillButt64]the passive is terrible i would change it no offense lower the passive damages or at least make them not scale with AD, and raise the CD on it specially if it has a passive[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Hmm, if you want to give a better idea of what your champion does, try explaining what he might look like, sound like, etc. If you want, you can add his stats (health, mana/health regen, etc.), as well as having his lore include other fellow champions. Overall I like your champion, good job![/quote]

[quote=Sventes][quote=devdevil] Hmm, if you want to give a better idea of what your champion does, try explaining what he might look like, sound like, etc. If you want, you can add his stats (health, mana/health regen, etc.), as well as having his lore include other fellow champions. Overall I like your champion, good job! [/quote] I was orginally planning on adding it all at one time, but my shift cahnge at work ended and I had to start driving home. Im gonna get all those up hopefully within the next 12 hours. TY![/quote]

[quote=ChaosxSoul]Hmm... I'd say your champion is Ok. The skill aren't either OP or UP. What really hinder him is the passive. Because he dosen't gain money over time, the enemy simply has to deny his early-game farm and he become almost useless mid and late-game. Either completely change it or let him gain money but at a slower rate.[/quote]