0 crit chance..:/ -

You use actual pics, instead of BBCoding. Read this guide, it should help you:
Making a Guide

It will help you make the guide look better, and have BBCodes instead of pics. Instead of putting big pics in your writing like , you can just do something like:

Nidalee, Smite, Heal, Teleport, Mercury's Treads.
This will give you anything like this.

heh thank man ! But is ma first guide ! That's the build of the item with him you unstoppable ;) But my biggest problem is that I am from Slovakia and i got problematic translates

good start!

your item build, is really weird. the BF sword doesnt become anything. also you should be starting with at least 3 health potions. you have okay coding, but could definitely use some improvement. for instructions, check out jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide! overall, you need some extra depth in each chapter especially for your masteries and items chapter. when you're done with that, add in a section about lane matchups. your tips lack the point of a tip. make them more specific and not so obvious.

keep up the good work!