First of all, i wont change everything that your saying cuze i dont like what you just posted me my build is perfectly good. Your oppinion is your opinion if you have your build like that i dont care this 1 is my and i said that i dont care abaut what you say i said im the Intro that this is my build if anyone wants to change it they can do it them selves i wont change + this is my way of playing i just posted if anyone wants to see read it and probably be good with it like i am.

Ok here is what i have to say Top to bottom

Runes - Wrong

You should be using Greater Glyph of Scaling Magic Resist and Greater Seal of Scaling Mana Regeneration
The other 2 are fine


Masteries
Take the 3 points out of Havoc and put them into Mental Force

Items
Start with boots and 3 health potions
Get Crystal Scepter instead of Athene's

Didnt bother to read the rest since its pretty bad already
Also fix all the spelling

Ooo i will i will add more stuff but for once i have some real life to work on too xD

Good pictures, you need more sections though

Oky i updated the build , Gived in combos ¨! Now there are pictures and collors :D

Why text is 90% same as the best Ahri guide on Mobafire? - The Fox In The Middle

expand on your guide, add more pictures, and your good to go +1

Try to use colors and decorate the guide.
I find the starting items not the best, since you will have no mobility early game and most of the ap carries have skill shots and it will allow you to dodge them. also make comment to vote on the guide so u won't get troll voted

Great guide, you got lots of valuable information just get some BB coding from here . +1 for you ^^