The items in the guide were actually co develped by someone who plays league of legends in the mlg circuit so they are not to bad, but I do realy like the idea of the Linch bane and I am anout to try it out in game. If I like it I will substitute that because you are right, if you are having a bad game then it does go against you. Thanks for the feedback!

Nice build, but the only thing is the frozen mallet.
even though u say its a build for under lvl 30, having rylai's already has the slow effect.
i guess i can understand the health but akali's meant to kill someone in an instant and run off without much damage on her.
but to be honest if its a build under lvl 30, then i have no idea what to replace it with o-o
Maybe a void staff? but that item is situational... same goes for mejai's
My thoughts is a lich bane? thats badass on akali
But besides that a build that i enjoyed reading. U added tips on how to espace and using skills to the fullest, which most builds won't show so gj on ur part

Nice build.
All I have to say you should go more in-depth with your guide, and organize your formatting better. :3

Oh, Mejai's Soulstealer is a situational item, it shouldn't be in your core build 24/7, or else if you do bad a game Mejai's Soulstealer will just cripple you and I don't see the point of having Frozen Mallet when you already have Rylai's Crystal Scepter, They both give a slow and they don't stack.

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