Rune are sub-optimal. Same for masteries. I wouldn't have Randuin's Omen in the main build as it is extremely situational on a marksman.

Your matchups section is mostly saying what x champion can do to Miss Fortune but you're not metnioning what should be done on your side.

There is no tactical play chapter and apart from that you do not explain your rune, mastery and core item choices in the guide. Rest of the explanations seem quite rushed as well.

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