Evelynn Build Guide by DeadlyTricks

I highly recommend you turn on "comment to vote" for now as otherwise, new prospective guides can be flattened by trolls even if they deserve a high rating. I'll check back on this when you've updated icons, etc. If you want, you can archive it until you're done, then unarchive.

A Competitive Guide to Mid Lane Kha'Zix

Hmmm I have to say the build is interesting and different from what I go about my Evelyn but you understand how EXPENSIVE all those items are ? Except boots ... Being a very expensive build you should take some time out in a full chapter explaining to your readers how they can go about Farming these items as Evelyn's Early game farming is very poor but also key to her being effective late game.

Also you should take some time and build a Chapter and explain Evelyn (with this build) the potential damage and what she can achieve through the games through Level 1 - 18. I see alot of people play Eve and over think their ability to get in KILL and get out SAFE. Causing them to die more then Kill and become a feeder. Evelyn is by far one of the most challenging champions in LofL, people think that going invis and killing someone 200 HP is all she has to do when it's not .... Especially against a team that farms for Wards and Oracles.

And like Jebus was saying, get some icons in your guide, so it be easier to enjoy and read .. then just get lost in a Wall of TEXT.

And now the icons are fix'd and added some pictures including the one in my sig ^.^

Yes I do understand how expensive the build is but its the core items that truly matter.
Trinity, Boots and the first Gunblade. All it takes is ganking and patience is the key. That seperates the good eves from the great. Patience.

(courtesy of my homie DarcMatteh)

I like it when they scream...;)

I consider Banshee's almost core to keep her alive and not get instagibbed after destealthing. Why no Lich Bane in your AP build?

A Competitive Guide to Mid Lane Kha'Zix

The build examples in the cheat sheet are pub stomp. To get into the real meat of the guide you have to read into it. And I simply forgot the lich bane. I haven't played eve AP since I made the hybrid build simply because you perform better with your team because you can dps and not just nuke. At the time lich bane wasn't so great on her but since rabadon's came out it is much more viable since you can get a lot more AP for less.

(courtesy of my homie DarcMatteh)

I like it when they scream...;)

Constructive Criticism:

1) I'd suggest only displaying one build, the build you make 90% of the time in games, and suggest the other builds in your guide in alternative items.

2) Good Hands > Perseverance

3) Don't list useless summoner spells. Also, if you're going to use the line separator, add in extra enter spaces so that the guide flows better.

4) An explanation of your skills would be nice.

5) Try centring your images/icons etc for aesthetic reasons.

6) With your Build Examples, I'd suggest instead of linking, showing.

ie for Ashe:

7) Combine your Pros/Cons into one section with different headings for better comprehension and less waste of space.

8) You need a lot more colour in your guide.

1) I'd suggest only displaying one build, the build you make 90% of the time in games, and suggest the other builds in your guide in alternative items.

I don't play one build exclusively. I play them all, roughly, in even amounts. It keeps people who've seen before guessing.

2) Good Hands > Perseverance

Thats a matter of personal preference. I like Perserverance much better simply because of the extra little bit in my early game which I mention is key to being a good evelynn player.

4) An explanation of your skills would be nice.
Agreed I'll do that when they do the next update.


5) Try centring your images/icons etc for aesthetic reasons.
How do I do that?


6) With your Build Examples, I'd suggest instead of linking, showing.
I'll work on it.

7) Combine your Pros/Cons into one section with different headings for better comprehension and less waste of space.
I like it the way it is simply because it makes it easier to navigate the guide from the ToC.


8) You need a lot more colour in your guide.

Yea. btw did you catch my joke? :3


Thank you for the criticism, I take it to heart.

(courtesy of my homie DarcMatteh)

I like it when they scream...;)