you guys have to remember that this was made in about 30 mins and is still not finished and i will take all comments in to consideration

Like Flowstylex said go look up the BB coding, other then that I like seeing different ways to build a champions skill order but I don't think it's the right order, but I will have to try it out :)

Not mentioning the walls of text and almost nonexistent formatting.

And some item choices are questionable at best.

Also, masteries are wrong, skill order is wrong, and runes are complete garbage

^ Kinda right. Sorcs are much better boots. Mask Rylai's Rabadon's and void staff are a better core for damage (Ok maybe not rylai's).

Trash.

Masteries aren't ideal, your runes don't make any sense, your choice of boots is peculiar, your endbuild doesn't have enough magic pen. How are you ever going to burn through an Irelia or another tanky carry-hunter.
It isn't a beautiful build either so there is no reason to upvote.

a standard masteriepage for a apc like Fizz is something like 21-0-9 or 21-9-0. They give better stats because the 9th point in your secondary tree gives a really nice bonus like Veteran's Scars (30 hp @lvl 1, a really good one)

Magic pen is really important. I'm not a mathematical genius but magic resist/penetration work exponentially which means that a little pen already gives a significant boost against the small amount of mres the enemy carries have. (and if you fight people with high magicresist and you have no penetration they receive like 30% percent of the damage you throw at them (i believe that was with 100 mres, don't quote me on this though.)

Use bb-coding to make it at least a bit good-looking. the text of your guide isn't well written or special so you should get the appearance in your favor.

Pretty good guide actually, interesting Items and so on. But i reccommend you to use more BB-Codes. If you don't know how or still having problems, go to jhoijhoi's guide, which you can find here