Zerk greaves? Double lifesteal? Building huge damage? Bad masteries, bad grammar, odd approach to the game, thinking a diamond is "jelly" of your bronze 5 guide?
Guide also needs a lot of expansion. There is nothing on teamfighting / the role you play.

Sorry, guide does not live up to my standards
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LOLWUT. Why the hell would I be jelly? It is bad.

I realise you are jelly of my shyvana guide, but this is for Low Elo players who want to carry , having more damage and keeping tankyness

Besides grammar stuff, you are not doing it right.

Shyv wants hybrid pen marks instead of armor pen, 9/21/0 masteries instead of 4/23/3 and you should generally only be getting one offensive item: blade of the ruined king.

Any more mistakes?

Thanks, I apreciate all feedback :D

+1, Nice guide, will try it out soon
Also, pmed you some mistakes in your grammar