Heimerdinger Build Guide by Shiggityswaa

u need to go to ashe builds go to jhoijhoi click the karthus build and learn how to build a good guide.This guide is realy helpfull but with the skill it could be awsome =D

1. Now... I don't agree with your mana potions in the beggining. Boots of Speed 2x Health Potions and one Mana Potion is a common strarting nad it works great. Or you can buy Chalice of Harmony early and then you sell them mid or late game. So the items are ok.

2.Your guide is colourless. I don't like that. Add some colour and coding.

3.Mini HowToCode guide just for you!

This is the most common code:

Hextech Micro-Rockets

Ignite

Thanks to MissMaw for the sig

Soraka Guide!

yeah with everything they have said I do agree with them and also my input is:
With your guide it was hardest for me to keep on reading threw the wall text in the items because how you have set it up there is no way to really tell what Item your talking about when if some one was just scrolling threw it so please check out jhoijhoi guide of how to make a guide the karthus one read all of it then try making another guide or something and see how much better it will look and how interesting it might seem.
Good Day,

Nomoya

thx Jhoijhoi for this signature
Here is a link to my review page if you want me to review a guide you might have Review Page
Or check out my first mobafire guide Magewick Reborn

Yeah, I created this at 3 in the morning this morning. thanks for the advice and I shall work on improving it ;)

^^ Good luck with the guide, looking forward to seeing some coding implemented :)

taking a break for tonight, I know the item and skill sequence is going to be long and dull but I will work on it tomorrow. Also like I said feel free to leave comments on what u feel needs to be changed