Presentation: 25/40
Description
- Aesthetically, the guide is visually appealing, and sticks to a central theme.

- The author does not seem to be to familiar with the use of BBCode.

- Cheet sheet meets all requirements, and is nicely organized.

- Some information may be missing on how to play Lux.

My Thoughts
- Now, I have hit you harder on Presentation then I have anyone else. Only because I have to be fair. You might be asking "Then, why give me the review?". Its because this guide has potential. And when I say that it has potential, I mean that it is bursting at the seams! It is very evident that you want this guide to look good, however, you may just need a little help getting it there.

- Coding wise, this guide is quite basic. You use the chapter layout that MOBAFire provides, and it doesn't seem you are familiar with any of the interesting coding templates that could be used. This is not surprising, considering it is your first guide ever. Please, don't take this the wrong way. I am saying this because I, or any of the veterans (anyone whose name is green or dark orange) would be more than happy to provide interesting and complex coding templates that come out stunning in your guide. All you have to do is ask.

- Chapters wise, as mentioned before, you are missing quite a bit of information. You don't have to go extremely in depth, but you still want to make the guide as if you are introducing someone to Lux who can't even tell what role she plays. A bit more in depth explanations on her abilities, and a gameplay section (something explaining on how to actually play her) would help this guide out ALOT.

Grammar/Spelling 25/30
Description
- Quite a few grammatical errors could be found.
- No significant spelling errors could be found

My Thoughts
- On my home page, I state that it is nearly impossible to get a perfect score on grammar without doing a very in depth spell check. No guide has yet to get a perfect score on it, and even my own guides wouldn't get it. That said, it does seem as if you were typing very fast when making this guide, and the mistakes are evident. An in depth spell check could help out alot, and make it easier to read.
- Spelling is easy though.

Organization 25/30
Description
- Chapters are well organized and easy to follow.
- Information is somewhat hard to follow.

My Thoughts
- The chapters are fine, but the information specifically tends to be a bit all over the place. This could actually be a cause of you missing some information. If a brand new Lux player came into this guide, chances are, they could get lost in the random info you have throughout the guide.


Final Thoughts: On average, this is kind of a low score. I cannot give an upvote due to it. Don't let this discourage you though! I said it before, and I'll say it again; THIS GUIDE HAS POTENTIAL! There are plenty of useful and interesting tools here on MOBAFire that you can use to really make this guide shine (no pun intended)! If you feel you need it, feel free to ask for help! In all honesty, though, a very good first try! Other first time guides would get nowhere close to the amount of points you got!

*Edit'd because read item section*

Oh, great, you have Ludens listed in the main items to grab section and Rylais as a more situational item. Well, you should probably know that you have it the other way around in the cheat sheet, so i was sorta confused ;p

The Abilities section's great, but you don't actually mention which ability to max first and why :p
Good job! Keep it up!

HaHa I really did! Thanks for coming bye <3

At least you had fun making this guide :D

Yea I'll be working on that :) thanks for the comment ^_^

Custom ToC Guide

You're missing basic stuff like Runes and Masteries. Gameplay would also be a nice addition.