@Anterzhul i wouldn't have a wall of text if the site wasn't troll and make you have at least like a 1000 words not including spacing of words.

@Trans4M i didn't make the build for people to play her exactly like everyone wants her to be played. i made her how i play her, so that others can try it if they wish. not that your constructive criticism is bad.

if I am not mistaken but based on your guide, Akali's Twin Disciplines spell vamp passive will not be activated until you get your Pickaxe to build a Hextech Gunblade. A really bad choice because that 8% spell vamp could make a big difference between surviving one more hit from a gank or tower diving. Also you won't have much sustain in lane. One Health Potion will not help you sustain well in lane especially not against a caster e.g. say Kennen who can harass non stop with Thundering Shuriken

AARGH! walls of text!
Your guide is good overall, however it needs to be more aesthetically pleasing, try taking a look at This guide good guide by jhoijhoi on how to make a good looking guide!

also, an explanation on masteries/runes choice would be nice :D