Have updated the guide, didn't add too much. I'd actually really like some constructive criticism if possible. Especially with regards as to how the guide looks (too much walls of text???). And how I would be able to improve on those points. Thanks in advance!

Updated a bit, will be working on it a bit more now. Will also start a Kog'maw guide probably, or maybe a Cho'Gath one. Not sure yet.

I forgot to vote, over-all definitely a nice guide!

Hey, thought your build was a nice read and it had some really nice points in it, although i would suggest a Shield over a pot and Amp tome, the Early AP isn't really needed in my opinion a Doran's shield would bring your surv up, and you could easily stay there till level 8 without purchasing, although if both of the opposing champions are cottage cheese, then an Amp tome may work very well for some good harassment. Otherwise, +1 nice build :)

If there's anything I forgot to mention, feel free to tell me that. Any tips or things you would like to point out would be greatly appreciated. Any tips on making the build/guide look better would be appreciated as well. And I'll update this as much as needed, so feel free to criticise it as much as you like. I'm open to suggestions and will try them in-game if they sound pretty decent.