If your mechanics as Talon are awful this build will help you learn, but you should not expect the build to win every single game for you without putting in any effort. The build focuses on survivability. Normal Talon builds focus simply on bursting a target down, well, there are other ways to play talon.

With this build you will still have high amounts of AD and you will also have lifesteal. The downside is you won't have as much cooldown reduction for most of the game.

You should consider Tiamat as your core item. Not only does it boost your DPS in a fight, but it also adds good waveclear. Your only other waveclear ability is W which doesn't get a reduction in cooldown as you level it up.

Duskblade is pretty good. It adds a little bit of true damage burst as well as a good amount of AD and lethality. What really makes this item amazing though is it's sweeper effect. It will make your roaming a hell of a lot more effective. Sometimes, when your team is very stupid or underfed, you may need to splitpush. Duskblade lets you get around undetected.

Ninja Tabi are truly a great item. They allow you to burst down the ADC before the ADC burst you down. This build is more oriented towards dueling, so you'll have the upper hand in prolonged or 1 vs 1 situations.

Death's Dance is pretty neat... Honestly just a great item. Everything about it fits nicely into this build.

Phantom Dancer is also very nice, gives you a little bit of defense, a little bit of movement speed and quite a bit of attack speed and critical chance. You should definitely get PD if you're the one who has to push.