oh and my main mobafire account is "Volex"

try about 6 to 10 hours and you'll figure out alot, and this build is no longer, how do you say, effective. If you go over to Vapora's guide he explains a WAY better build that works insanely well. Beleive me iv'e tried many things for Talon and his guide has been ULTRA effective. Study more, learn BBcoding and game on

Thank you so much for your constructive criticism. Embarrassing admission: this is my first guide ever, and I really wanted to try that BBcoding, however after two plus hours of work, i gave up. can anyone help me on this?

Bad runes - you're very squishy, bad masteries- you got no crit yet you take crit masteries and Havoc , you also put points in utility instead of getting some actualy helpful defensive stats. The guide doesn't have any bb coding so it's not realy apealing to the viewer, badly done.

+1 sirell

I suspect a pre-level 30. Either that or newly level 30. Either that or Bronze.

If not any of the above, I will be very surprised.

Some basic BBcoding would go a long way towards making your guide easier on the eyes. Stuff like Trinity Force instead of the text "Trinity Force", etc etc.

You've got the general idea down though.

-1 for runes and masteries.