The borders of the "Runes" section seemed a bit redundant. Other than that, nice in depth guide and i'll give you an up vote if you changed that a bit.
Your guide is going great so far :)

Not up to date yet and pretty sloppy.

really in depth

I admit that your items are very good and your spells and masteries, etc ...

But I felt like you didn't really connect with your audience all that well. What I like to see in a guide is how you do with your readers. For one thing, this isn't a fresh guide, so that may be part of it. But the entire guide is so focused on BUILD THIS BUILD THIS BUILD THIS.

Why not take time to tell us about how to play as her? Or different tricks and tips?

Also, try not to make all of this a wall of text. The opening was great in that sense, but as it went on, it seemed as if you lost the care and will to make an effort. I can't take someone seriously if they don't make an effort to make a visually appealing guide that connects to the reader.

Maybe I am being too picky, but if you fix these things, then I will gladly change my vote. I can tell you know your champ, but try to connect to us readers!

Good job otherwise.

I admit that your items are very good and your spells and masteries, etc ...

But I felt like you didn't really connect with your audience all that well. What I like to see in a guide is how you do with your readers. For one thing, this isn't a fresh guide, so that may be part of it. But the entire guide is so focused on BUILD THIS BUILD THIS BUILD THIS.

Why not take time to tell us about how to play as her? Or different tricks and tips?

Also, try not to make all of this a wall of text. The opening was great in that sense, but as it went on, it seemed as if you lost the care and will to make an effort. I can't take someone seriously if they don't make an effort to make a visually appealing guide that connects to the reader.

Maybe I am being too picky, but if you fix these things, then I will gladly change my vote. I can tell you know your champ, but try to connect to us readers!

Good job otherwise.

This is the best

She has CC in her Vault

Pretty darn good. Thanks.

I do not quite understand why this guide is overlooked, it seems just fine. The top 5 guides for this champ are much better but still yours deserves some looks