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My Shield Is Here For You
Prologue
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Presentation
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Art
The only gaps I can think of is in the final two chapters where you could add a side-image, and in the introduction: an introductory banner.
Coding
Same applies for your runes chapter if you want to go full-pro (align icons with the headers).
Everything else looks great.
Cheat Sheet
Organization
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Chapters
Information
Introduction
As a support main, you can brag about the amount of Braum games which gave you the experience to write this guide.
Pros / Cons
"Wind-wall mechanic" - I would change this into "Can block abilities", as it does not work exactly like Wind Wall.
Abilities
Winter's Bite : Something about mana-management should be included in the tips section
I don't know how I feel about not maxing Winter's Bite first though. I think it should be maxed first if you're in a winning lane to ensure your lane dominance. If you're losing, it's only natural to go on the defensive.
Unbreakable does not absosb true damage.
Unbreakable only shields Braum in case of AOE abilities like Pillar of Flame, your allies will take damage.
Ability sequence: I would advice to make a custom ability sequence, the current one is kind of hard to comprehend immediately. Could make one for you if you want.
Spells
Any ideal situations where you would prefer Ignite over Exhaust?
Warding
"NOTE: I personally did these photographs, they do not interfere with any copyright infringement, however use without permission may result in punishment. this should either be underneath your photo album, or removed. You use a League of Legends © picture as well, so for consistency's sake you should mention it. But as nobody does it anyway I wouldn't mention it. Not much you can do about it anyway if someone uses them without permission, unless they're registered :p
Laning Phase
About your ADC and farming. You should help him under turret. Hit some of the minions to ensure your adc can lasthit them. You could elaborate on the matter a bit, explain it in-depth.
Ganking
In about the jungler: After a successful bottomlane gank, you should immediately go for the turret if you're not heavily dominating the lane, and get Dragon afterwards. Get the most out of the situation. When healthy enough you can even go and rotate midlane to take/damage that turret as well.
Team fights
A bit short-sighted on top lane role. Yes it is possible to have a tank there, but you could also have a Riven, Lissandra or Pantheon. So they won't always engage; they will try to catch someone, go in after your initiator or peel for the carry.
(I PREFER A SLIDESHOW BTW)
Summary and Acknowledgements
Fine
About the Author
Fine
Language
"...he needs some more surviv/disengage-/engage-ability." -> needs a whole new wording
& "Because of offensive not giving much else other than" -> Because the offensive (mastery) tree does not provide much more than...
Careful about "you're". Sometimes you use "your" instead.
I.e.: "Playing as Braum means your most likely playing support"
Possesion: "it's own definition" -> "its". "It's" is short for "it is".
Look for things like this. It might be nitpicky but it will improve reading overall.
Viability
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Item Choices
My remarks:
Masteries
Just glad that you took Juggernaut .
Runes
Summary
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Grade:
9/10
Good job!
Well done, definitely deserved my upvote. I would like to see more of your stuff in the future.
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Best of luck with your guide!