I never said the extra bolts from Ashe's Q applied on-hit effects. That's not the point of this concept. This focus of this build is Ashe's Q's interaction with Runaan's Hurricane Runaan's Hurricane. Unlike Ashe's Q, the extra bolts from Runaan's Hurricane DO apply on hit effects. Please read the guide again if you want to see why a on-hit build is good on Ashe.

The extra bolts from Ashe's Q do NOT apply on-hit effects. She isn't particularly good for on hit - no better than other ADCs that is.

Okay, thank you so so much. :)
As you said, I am new so thank you very much for the advice.I'll try to make those changes

Jhoijhoi's guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506

As jokersprank said, try and make everything you write eye-catching. Use icons. Instead of saying "ashe's ult" say Ashe's ultimate, Enchanted Crystal Arrow which is done like this:

You seem new to me so a quick review.

As aguide writer you want a nice eye-catching title for your guide but yours is too long. (And some wouldn't even know you're talking about top Ashe.) Shorten it simply:

Hurricane Devourer TOP Ashe: The Team Fighting Terror

Your introdution is longer than most other texts. I would also put your pros and con section beneath your introdution as you have to convince your readers to read a guide to an unconventional build.

If you think your guide is boring and long, it probably is. Spice it up with some humor and make it short. Pictures can explain as much as an essay. And research the thing with the runaans and botrk interaction. It's your job to provide us information. That's a guide for. Of course you can give the readers freedom but that doesn't mean you can leave out facts.

Read jhoijhoi's guide to making a guide for reference.