ty alot for ur comment im new to guides, so this will help me alot. i know that about the pictures and the other builds, but i havent had time to fix it. im from norway so ty for telling me my grammar is good. im going to fix my guide better when i get time for is
TY PROTOHEX

I don't play much of Amumu, but there are a few things that I can point out that should help you a little.

• That's the only build? When you write a guide, you should typically not just include what you think are the best items to go for, but you should also include some situational items. Every game is different, so therefore the way you approach each game should be different as well. Make another section that offers another way to build him if the standard build is not going to help.
• Second, when you describe your build/skill sequence, don't just say, "This is a good build..." or "This is the ideal way you should build..." Include some variation. Defend your choices. Explain why these items are better than others.
• Pictures, please! :D This will make it more fun for us to read, as well as making it easier than looking at walls of white. For example:

I used to find this item pointless but due to the new jungle changes it works fairly nicely! Use this item if you are going a tankier route and/or need tenacity.

I have been experimenting with this item quite a bit lately and I have had some amazing games, and some bad ones. All I'm guna say about this item is, high risk - high reward. If you feel like you can afford going all damage and no defense then by all means, take that chance, but you have been warned. I'd recommend this item to high level Amumu players.

• Now isn't that pretty? ^_^ It'll also make it easier for the reader to understand, as not all of us are experienced junglers and know exactly what each item does. You can find a guide on how to code as awesome as that here.
• Finally, I'd just like to comment that your grammar is really good ^_^ I know a lot of people who just rush their guides and completely forget to capitalize beginnings of sentences or put punctuation in the right spots.

Well, that's it for me. I think your guide is definitely going in the right direction, but some coding should definitely liven it up! I hope you'll think over what I've thrown out there, and best of luck with your guide!

^dat name tho

When I had a quick look at the guide, I thought like "hey, finally a decent amumu build", but when I saw Athenes, ghost, skill order and masteries I got majorly dissapointed and downvoted.