BBCode is very important because it makes your guide pretty!

Try using some more colors, text sizes, pictures, text effects, and bbcode in general...

One important thing is two ]'s and two ['s surrounding a champion, skill, mastery, (possibly rune), summoner spell and item will show a small icon of the picture in front of the word that can be hovered over in order to show the stats. Examples

Twisted Fate
Ruby Crystal
Wild Cards
Executioner
Flash

These are helpful for viewers because, if we don't know what you're talking about we can figure it out very easily by hovering over. Another reason is because it breaks up your text much better.---


Wild Cards allows Twisted Fate to clear minions waves and deal damage from very far away. Champions like Darius will have a tough time getting near him because of his high range from Wild Cards and his utility from Pick A Card!

In the paragraph above it is simple knowledge who Darius is and what Wild Cards and Pick A Card do (although beginners may not know). In a more complicated example....

Executioner is a must get on Twisted Fate his ability to deal great amounts of damage fairly quickly and on a low cooldown make this mastery a must have! Be careful though because Fizz's Seastone Trident will deal a percentage of your missing health in damage so if you are low health against him do not rely on this mastery too heavily.

Most people are here to read about Twisted Fate not Fizz so they might now know what Seastone Trident is but now they can hover over it to find out

This is also very effective for items because---

Zhonya's Hourglass and Lich Bane are great items on Twisted Fate for many reasons....

It may be hard to read what you just wrote for new players because those items are unfamiliar to them. Although you are going to explain them slightly you will be focusing on why their are excellent on Twisted Fate not what they do. So if a new player wants to learn more about an item he/she can find out easily.


I apologize but i am writing this without looking directly at your guide currently but from my current memory i do not believe you have section dedicated to early/mid/late game?


For Twisted Fate especially the stage of the game is very important regarding his role. Another important thing is having a sort of "combo" area where you talk about how/when/in what order you use your abilities.

Sorry for the long comment but i hope it was at least a little bit helpful!!!
Have a nice day! :D

RoA, no
Athene's, no
Coding, no
Barrier, not against most mids

Everything else is standard, except you should just take the 9 in defense.

The build is alright, but holy **** the pros and cons section is a crime against your readers. Make sure to read the section on using columns in the link.

Turn on comment to vote :) but anyways, it's a good guide, it's just I'd suggest looking at the link Vynertje linked and remaking your guide from there. It's a good first guide, although I would just archive this and then work on a new guide with better BBcoding :)

+1

thank you

Read up on this to learn how to write guides: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506

Build seems fine, would change around runes and masteries a bit though.