I've made the adjustments and credited you in the change log.

First of all thank you for being able to take criticism. It's a rare thing on the internet these days. In terms of level 1 skill if you look at the numbers Northern Winds does more damage in total, not to mention it has a 8 second lower cooldown than Arctic Assault and your basic attack will increase your W's damage even more on the camps. It really is just straight math, but if invading or in fear of an invade your Q may be a safer option because of the engage/escape mechanic. Still, nice work overall.

I've added MS Quints an AS Marks in my "Viable Choices" section, i prefer the flat damage marks, i have however been toying with the idea of swapping out my quints for movement, i shall try it out and see how it plays then adjust the guide if it is required. I actually find my camps are cleared much faster with Q, as it does a nice amount of damage on the hit and you only really have it for wolves and blue, then you hit 2 and get W anyway.

I do however think you're spot on with the Masteries and shall adjust the guide soon to reflect this, and credit you ofcourse in the changelog.

Marks should be AS and Quints MS. Masteries need to be either 9/21/0 or 0/21/9. W is a better lvl 1 camp clear than q

No. BoS, your runes, your skill order, some of your items, all are sub optimal