thanks for good guide :D

thanks for good guide :D

Hi Hi~! I'm here for the review you requested. Let's begin!


Appearance - I'm not gonna lie the appearance of your guide is pretty damn bad. The BB Coding is a bit sloppy and very very plain. No guide graphics either. The appearance of your guide needs A LOT of work.

Cheat Sheet - I'm not gonna lie about this too. First of all there's 5 Cheat Sheets. That is completely unnecessary. To be honest I got lost in those Cheat Sheets because they are so confusing. Some aren't even finished. Others are just messy. This section of your guide also requires a lot of work.

Viability - Your guide is like half viable. Never and I mean NEVER take Scaling Armor runes on Singed. It makes you wayyyy too soft early game. Scaling Magic Resist runes against AP's? You take Flat AP runes against AP's not scaling ones. You didn't include Crystaline Flask as an optional start. Flask is actually a great starting item and it saves Singed a lot of gold. Also you shouldn't always start with Q at lvl 1. Sometimes starting E is better. And finally Exhaust and Teleport are great summoner spells for Singed. Not always but depending on the match-up they can be great. Everything else in the guide seems viable.

Tidiness - Do I need to say anything? :P Organize yo chapters mang!

Spelling Mistakes - There are spelling and grammar mistakes here and there. Might wanna fix those.

Content - The content is..meh..there's lots of things you can add. Expand the match-ups chapter, add skill order and skill explanation chapters and maybe add some gameplay videos for Singed (but that's your call).


Final Thoughts and Grade:
Well like I said the things you can work on are:

• Add more chapters
• Fix the BB Coding and add more of it
• Fix those Cheat Sheets and reduce the number of them.
• Re-think some of your item/rune choices
• Add some Guide Graphics/Banners
• Fix the grammar/spelling mistakes

In my opinion this guide has a long way to go. Luckily for you I play mainly Singed in ranked and top lane in-general so if you ever wanna ask me anything about Singed feel free to do so :P

No vote from me and a grade of 4. Sorry I didn't really show you any mercy..well I guess I kinda did cause I was thinking of giving you a 3 BUT..I think your guide can improve. Plus you said it yourself that you will work on it more. When you're done request a second review for it if you want ^^

-cyberskull

I will be adding a new rating system to my items (thanks to singerofthefall) and a better mastery section, with more coding, like above. Also probably an ability section.

Some tips for your guide:

• include alternative starting items in same area, not all over cheat sheet
• When discussing a item / champion matchup / summoner spell / etc, make the icon larger and more distinct
• to communicate mastery / rune / item choices better, a bar representation like this:Making a Guide should have all the info you need)
• include a chapter on laning and one on late game/teamfights

I think that's about all for now, if you need any help pm me.

I am going to release more item options and just improvments in a bit, but as for surelias, it provides 250 health which is nice, 10% cdr. not used much since ult lasts so long, and health and mana regen which do little with how much health and mana you have. The active is about the only useful thing about this item which speeds you up 40% for 3 seconds. In this build we have plenty of speed with ghost and singed's ult, so iniciates are easy already. Sorry for writing a book but these are my thoughts.

why not get shurya's on singed because it gives a bit of defense stats and also allows singed to catch up and shut down escaping options which singed really excels at.

There is an update coming in about a week with new coding, hopfully new sections and a few different items and runes. Thanks to Meiyjhe for telling of thou sins. Thormail is getting replaced with Frozen heart too.

Thanks,
Forget about the boy

You asked for it:

Thou sins
1. Mana regen marks
2. Your anti-AD build is waaay too anti-AD that your forget about AP, same other way around.
3. Frozen heart is the better armor option for Singed, not Thornmail
4. Cheat sheet structure completely messed up
5. Barely any coding in your guide
6. Summoner spell section talks about "other" summoner spells, but these are not explained.
7. No runes, no masteries and no ability explanations.

Thou blessing
1. Comment to vote is on
2. "Okay" build
3. Good use of titles and structure, though the titles are waay to much like the chapter titles

Result: Path of Redemption
There are a looot of things that can improve.
The coding, the content, the cheatsheet, a lot of it.
Though, you PM'ed me, saying that you wanted to improve, which is admirable :D
Since there are also a lot of guide makers that think their result is already perfect, and do not care for improvement.

Work on your sins and you may be redeemed :D

Good luck :D

Clint Lloy e2 ok na yung build mo

Good Start, if you want help on the pictures PM me.