Hey, some pictures would be great, also, some situational items like maxing Nunu & Willump first against someone like Vladimir or Riven who can out sustain you and win every trade.

Hey, thanks for the feedback. I did this in about 30 minutes and the link was a reference to another site where I got part of the core from. I'm just extending it and adding some experiences. I will try to go back and edit the guide to make it more appealing and less monotonous.

Ok some problems. First it's not good that people need to click a link to another site to see your build. Also this is pretty much a huge wall of text. It's hard to read. You seem like you know what your talking about, but no one will read because the fact that there is 0 coding done here.