Lux Build Guide by Kiimochii

Another beautiful guide Kiimochii, I can tell already!
I can't wait till you finish it! It will look really color (like your other one) and pretty... and helpful! (:.

Thank you! :).

Ill do it

Build it self

• You forgot about 6.th item :)
• Think do you really need summoner's wrath and summoner's insight ?
• I would advice to change your masteries from Meditation to swifteness
• All right , you got right runes :
  
  
  

  Guide it self

  • MAIN PROBLEM - WHY IS IT SO COLORFULL THAT DISTURNES FROM READING AND IS USELESS. If you need to show sometinh really important try to use color then.
  • Try to add someting to you introducion because looks like you got lack of words ther
  • Add more situational items like Rylai's Crystal Scepter or Will of the Ancients
  • You should add a chapter called "summary"
  • I would advice you to add sections like "early game" / "mid game" /"late game"
  • Also you can do a "other midlaners" section lake that you got in your ahrii guide.
  • Yeah i really like your images.
  
  So theese were my thought about your guide
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  Visual - Your vissual is preatty good but only take of the colore of all textes its 2 bright. 7/10
  
  Quality - 6/10 , really decent guide, add some sections items, text.
  
  Information - 7/10 , you got a lack of text work on it
  
  Grammar - <9000 , i dont review grammar so it will be over 9000.

Thanks for your feedback! Of course the guide isnt completed yet, I'm going to add early game / mid game / late game soon. I was just about to get on that too xD. thank you so much (:

good guide

first of all, this guide is simply very well laid out and so colorful. its a good thing that this guide is simply attractive to look at. i dun really agree with your glyphs. think AP/Lvl is still better or CDR or magic resist. dun really like the extra 9 AP at lvl 1. IMO, it doesnt really help me. for your masteries, i think you should put the 3 AP points into the 3 AD area in your offensive mastery tree. sure you are going AP, but the AP wont help you much, but the AD will be great for helping you to last hit and all. for your summoner spells section, think you should add spells like heal (cuz its still viable) and ghost (for those who dun have flash or maybe for preferance issues). for your situational items section, you should add in WoTA, cuz spell vamp is a boss. maybe also add in sorc boots for those who dun like CDR lux. lastly, start working on a section about lane matchups. this is a great guide, just some tiny improvements to be made.

keep up the good work~

;D I know, its an unfinished guide, just needed an opinion, and also: I am going to make an other boots varities section, early game, mid game, late game section, and etc. xD.

Positives:
+Your "Cheat Sheet" is solid!
+Good build that works wonders on a "Double-Tap"/ ability -> basic attack champion.
+Great section headers, they compliment your guide very well.
+Nice use of color coordination with abilities and items.

Possibilities:
~Yes, Lux is all about light and color, but to some degree you need to limit all that color (even on the Lux guides)
~You could really use some more "How-to" sections to your guide. Try not to create a guide for the sole purpose of justifying your item selection.
~Try and add some more sections. It seems like you are missing a lot of basic information when it comes to actually playing Lux.
~It looks like you are over-using your line separators.

Negatives:
-Since I just mentioned line separators... Give credit to the person who made them, same goes for your Section headers.
-Please! Please! Please! Cut down on all that Bold text. It's killing me lol.
-You talked about core items, share why you selected the other items as well. The biggest question that most guides fail to answer is "WHY?"

When you have made some vaild changes to your guide, pm me and I will return and leave a final vote.

If this has helped you please +Rep me

OH i know about the credits, im adding credits when im done with the guide lol

+ Colorful, but not annoying

- AP/lvl Glyphs > AP Glyphs
- You should add 6 items to your cheat sheet (you can sell the Doran's Ring and buy something else)
- Try to make use of columns
- Needs more in-depth, but you wrote that you are not finished, so yeah :P

Let me know when you are finished, since it is not I will not give a rating either. However you could consider adding sections on mid game, late game, teamfights, ganks from jungler, ganking other lanes, etc.

Hi, I'm reviewing your guide based upon your request for a trade at jhoijhoi's review shop. In exchange for my review I'd appreciate either a comment on my own guide or +rep. I may appear captious at parts of my review but in the end of the day I just intend to give constructive criticism as to improve the quality of the guide.

Quite some sound advice within this guide given in a attractive package and fantastic formatting. Suggestions for future chapters would be team-fights and late-game (which I suspect will come up anyway). I'll refrain from voting till the cheat sheet build is complete, but from what I've seen so far I'm defiantly liking the guide.

Masteries

Standard substantially correct AP mastery build, although I would make a bullet point note on Summoner's Wrath as to make extra clear to only take when picking up Ignite and to simply go 4/4 Mental Force if for whatever reason you didn't pick Ignite.

Runes

Should include some more options outside of that of what you use as some may not have access to said runes or would look for alternatives. Greater Glyph of Scaling Ability Power out-scale Greater Glyph of Ability Power post-6 and considering you'll be playing solo mid you'll reach 6 at a reasonably fast rate thus it being the better choice for an AP carry as some have said before me. I reckon Greater Seal of Scaling Mana Regeneration should be given acknowledgment as you could choose to mix a combination with Greater Seal of Replenishment as to gain a steady flow, or just go outright with the scaling ones as to have a better efficiency later on to be able to spam spells with no consequences (blue buff regen has been nerfed and she is one of the most mana hungry champions in the game). There is always the defensive option of Greater Glyph of Magic Resist if confronting a difficult match-up.

Core Items

I see little to no reason as to why you should get Ionian Boots of Lucidity never-mind consider it a core item, you can easily achieve almost the cooldown cap without them through blue buff + Sorcery + Elixir of Brilliance you reach 34% (6% away from the cap). It is a misuse of stats (and to a point money) as your just going to be going over the cap putting the extra CDR to no use. The more potent damage from Sorcerer's Shoes are superior as it grants flat magic penetration, combined with your marks it makes you capable of dealing true damage to these without magic resist items/runes (which consists of a lot of AP mid opponents).

Mention again how her passive works in correlation with Lich Bane to aid justifying it as a core item (I don't disagree with Lich Bane being a core item just that for these who may doubt it extra explanation should serve well).

Other Items (Situational)

Will of the Ancients may be considered a situational pick if you have a AP top (such as Rumble or Swain) and wish to stack double auras.

Aesthetics

As said presentation wise it is almost flawless with great appropriate color coding of text and correctly placed images. I say almost since the one hiccup I have is the azul colored paragraph at the introduction which seems really out of place and not so desirable towards the eye.