Thank you for the tips, they have been taken into consideration :) This is also a half completed guide at the moment. The phantom is apart of the build for its critical chance and high move speed it offers, and a vote one day would be sincerely appreciated.
Thank you again

Hi,

may I recommend you to edit the items section a little bit to make it more appealing and easy to read as it is a huuuge wall of text right now?

Also I do not agree with attack speed glyphs and the Phantom Dancer as I do not see Talon much of a auto attack champion and think Boots of Swiftness should be enough for run speed.

I will not vote on your guide just because I have a slight different opinion on this champion and instead not vote it at all.
If you make your layout more appealing and bring in more thoughts about attack speed, then maybe I even consider an up vote.