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If you want to update it and show it to people to receive feedback, you can always publish it and then immediately archive it, so that the people that you show it to can give feedback through PM.
So I'll get to that soon :)
As for the rest of the guide, you're missing a lot of sections and some of the sections you have now are not necessary.
I would change it from
1.Introduction
2.Items
3.Mobility
4.Skill Sequence
5.Farming
6.Summary
1.Introduction
2.Pros/Cons --> NEW
3.Abilities --> NEW
4.Skill Sequence
5.Runes --> NEW
6.Masteries --> NEW
7.Summoner Spells --> NEW
8.Items
9.Gameplay --> NEW
10.Farming
11.Summary
These sections contain:
Pros/Cons: Talons strengths and weaknesses
Abilities: A description of Talons abilities, possibly combined with some useful tips on when and how to use his abilities
Skill Sequence: why you have chosen this levelling sequence. The sequence in which you should use your abilities is something that should be placed in the gameplay section.
Runes: An explanation of why you use these runes, possibly listing alternative runes as well.
Masteries: Same as for runes, explain why you use 21/0/9 and list viable alternatives (if there are any).
Summoner Spells: An explanation of why you pick Ghost over Flash, whether Ignite, Flash and Teleport are viable alternatives and possibly an explanation as to why other summoner spells are not viable on Talon.
Items: The combination of your current 'Items' and 'Mobility' sections. Could use a bit more depth and alternative items.
Gameplay: Advice on how to play during the early, mid and late game. Information about certain combos that players should use when playing Talon is also a part of this section.
Farming & Summary: You already have these chapters. You could, however, consider describing how to farm in the 'Gameplay' section, thus removing the 'Farming' section completely.
If you still want jhoijhoi to look at this, I would recommend asking her again (using the right format). For now, however, I suggest you work on your coding/formatting/overall information. Good luck ;)
You've asked for some formatting help (links, BBcode, etc.) so here's a few resources.
BBCode Guide
Icons and Images
The Guide to Making a Guide
The last link is probably your best resource right now.
Also, one thing I noticed (because one of the only things in your item section) is your distaste for Trinity Force as an item. Yes, it gives AP. Everything else is useful, though. Sheen adds 150% of your base damage ON TOP OF YOUR NEXT ATTACK'S DAMAGE whenever you use an ability. What does this mean? When you activate your Q, you add 150% of your base AD on top of the buff that your Q gives you on top of your autoattacks damage. That is an INSANE amount of damage! Also, that gets amplified by cutthroat! Is it really that strange to give Talon that item? Movespeed increase, crit chance, AS, HP, AD, slowing autoattacks, mana, and the crazy good passive from Sheen.
Don't think that just because Phage only works a percentage of the time it isn't useful. The more attacks you land, the more likely it will be that you slow them. But the main reason that people like Trinity Force is due to the Sheen passive being so good on Talon.
Just a thought. If you really don't like it, that's perfectly fine. All I really came here to do was leave those links that I posted to allow you to work on formatting your guide better. I saw you on Jhoijhoi's thread, so I came on by.