good guide thumbs up

ok so when ur playing agaist mage ur uto attack the minons huh? try this and ur gonna die and dont vote the guide for the way i build it i say that my english is bad so dont blame for that and if u buy trinity ur diyng like a mouse is this that people wants?dying before they breath? so if u dont know how to play talon dont voting guides about him and if u max rake u will never destroy turrent so if u dont know shut up.At ranked if ur trying to kill ur losing farms and at last u will see eg Talon-35minions (Ahri-155minions WTF why ? so when this will happen dont ask this farm is the most important thing more farm means more gold if u have more gold u will become more feeded and if u become more feeded the enemy have no chance to beat u understood?

How long did it take for you to make this guide? 20 minutes? Anyway, this is terrible, just terrible. No pictures. No color. No nothing, just a wall of text.

You'er just writing everything like ONE BIG SENTENCE. You should really read it through before you post it to make sure it sounds ok.

Try out some BBCoding before you make it public.
Your grammar and spelling is terrible.

I know english isn't your native language but you should really improve it bofore you write a guide.

Dont write it abbreviations such as "U should this COZ..." It's not appealing.

And now to the mistakes you've made with the fact itslef.

You only need ArPen if the enemy is stacking armor. Not because you'er an assassin.

DO NOT BUY FROZEN MALLET. TRINITY FORCE IS BETTER IN EVERY CHASE.

ALWAYS max Rake first. Harras is much more important than pushing down the turret that early. You dont have to start ganking after the turret is down. You can do it after you've gotten your first or second kill.

And you say farming is more important than kills in ranked? IT'S MORE IMPORTANT ALL THE TIME! At least early game.

And your farming technique is completly wrong, let the minions do the work and then just auto attack them. Rake is only for harrasment. You can of course use Rake to last hit but it shouldn'r become a habit.

To sum it up. Probably one of the worst guides i've ever seen. I can of course change my vote but if that would happend, you must put alot of work into this guide and dont write like a ****** like you just did.

No problem, dude. :D

guys i reop u and deer i rate ur guide and thx cuz i didnt know about the bbcode (as i said this is my 1st guide)so now i know it and i can make my guides better ty u again:D

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Check out the BBCoding section to improve your guide.Your guide will look better with coding trust me, but it's a good guide .+1

Lafas!or not to eat?

Good guide but you are going to want to correct the spelling errors. For example verry instead of very.

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