"waaah my first guide be nice pls" is the most idiotic excuse to be conceived. If you really want to make a guide, you have to be prepared to put some actual effort into it. Making a bad guide, first one or not, shows you could give less than two ***** about the community, and I find it offensive.

However, this isn't just "the beginner's mistake" - this guide is total ****. There's nothing else to it. Attempting to go in-depth about this would result in making an essay, and I already have enough of that ****.

Tell me, who would you rather hire for your home renovation company, someone who went to a trades program, or a guy who just got out of highschool? Don't get pissed at me if my house turns into a dirt shack and I happen to get mad at your employee.

Laggermeister may be ruff on newcomers, which is both a good thing and a bad thing, every time he is ruff on ratings a beginner's mistake, they have two options fix up their guide, or delete it, if they listen and comeback with a new guide or they fix their mistakes, learning coding, elminate wall's of text, etc, etc. Then they make their next guide which is 100% better then the last, so that it's easy to follow, and find what your looking for etc. Making a guide is a work of art so criticism is going to happen, some are going to be harder then others when it comes to voting.

now it's my time to vote Clarity is good to get Mana back, but it takes the place of more useful spells, if you are landing your hit's and pacing yourself you don't need it, also starting with a Dorin's ring is only viable depending on your match up's not every game, maybe add a few different example start up builds with notes, other then that your on your way to making better guides.
but as for now -1

Why not be a jackass to new guide writers ? Decency.

I assume it is because of his view: If you are gonna write a guide, you have to be experienced. If you are a "newcomer" you should read guides. There is a reason why no one build tank Morgana in higher level play, you know.

I do agree, but i,m gonna leave some constructive feedback, at least.

Flash is necessary.

Zhonya's is necessary.

Morgana is used as an initiator. Flash --> Soul Shackles --> Zhonya's Hourglass --> Win Zhonyas should almost always be you first item. It is even useful for kills in lane. Do your combo and pop zhonyas. Watch as your opponent is helplessly stunned, forced to stay within Tormented Shadow. With Ignite they are almost certainly dead if you have done a decent job harassing them.

That's just you being bad. Everyone else understands why.

Step one: Coding
Step two: Fixing the walls of text

I don't get why the "Laggermeister" guy sinks so low as to rub it into every newcommer - who makes the beginner's mistake - with a downvote and hostility. Seriously get over it. Post something helpful.

Well, I was gonna leave you a link to Laggermeister's clarity guide the second I saw your summoners but it looks like he beat me to it :p

Anyways, I would consider flash or ignite instead of clarity and add runes for sure, the masteries are kind of strange as well as the skilling order. Good luck with your guide though ^^

Runes missing, masteries are a mess, summoner spells are *****. Instant -1, regardless of whether the build is good or not.

Thanks for the heads up about comment to vote! I had no idea what that button was, so I left it default. As for the final build, I usually only have 2 of those situational items at best by the time the game ends. Athene's and the Ionian Boots are really the key. The build used to be larger, but then there was the overhaul to the items, and I managed to simplify it. I'll try to update it for longer games. This is my first post, so I really appreciate the feedback!

O, and turn on comment to vote. It will discourage some trolls and make some downvoters leave reasons so you can improve

So there are 6 full items that you list in this guide, and yet you say 3 of them are situational items. I am gonna need an explanation here.