Vayne Build Guide by Simplifyx

Hiya, I'm reviewing your guide based upon your request for a trade at jhoijhoi's review shop.‚

Right so I'll start with the cheat sheet:
Runes are good, spells are good, sequence is well.. okay i guess. The build is really lacking in a few ways.
One being that there are no defencive items whats so ever, you should put your prefered on there.
also, you should make the item sequence more detailed instead of just listing the items one after another.

On to the guide,
all your pictures are blurry cause you're using imageshack, you should try imgur or photobucket to get better quality images in your guide. you should also center all the images (and videos if you have any). You should make some space between text and images, like 3 spaces :p
Your lore chapter is really lame :p you should get some bbcode there, or color or something, whatever makes it look better.
same for pros and cons.
in your cons you say 'No real escape spell' but you mean ability :p spells are flash and heal and you do have an escape spell :p
i don't like the formating on your ability chapter.
your runes section isn't detailed enough, should explain your choices more.
'when do i condemn' is a needless chapter you should just put it in the ability chapter.
alternative runes should be in the runes chapter.
summoner spells and masteries isn't formated nicely.
items chapter is very lacking. you only listed what you get, you didn't explain WHY you ge it. you also formated it poorly.
viable items should be in the items chapter.
skill sequence chapter looks bad, you should just show people the skill sequence from your cheet sheet and add those sequences that are depending on your enemy in the Realistic Lane Matchups (AD Carries) chapter.
farming chapter is undetailed and stuff.
warding chapter is lacking, you shouldn't even ward that much unless you know what.
lane partners chapter is un detailed.
some of the things you said are just wrong. you should know your supports before you write stuff like that.
Lane Matchups(All Champions) chapter... wat?
the baron chapter is needless.
you squished Early/Mid/Late Game all in one chapter instead of making a gameplay chapter and explaining all about early, mid and late game with detail.


So overall, you need more better formating, a few chapters were needless or missing key information.
Your images are all bad quality and not centered.
Shouldn't use imageshack, go with imgur or photobucket.
So yeah that's it, pm me if you do all these things and want a re review.

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this guide helped me better as any other guide, especially the skill sequence and the early & right use of condemn. its always a sure kill if used correctly in lane. THX! :-)
just placed a ward in the enemy brush and before he even recognized, it was too late and stuned him at the brush wall. works very well every game and secures sure kills at the beginning!

SUP SIMPLIFYX! I'm utopus, from jai's review shop. You wanted to get a review, so i just got down to where you are in her list =)

Here's what i have to say:

• HOLY ****! This is such an amazing guide! You really covered all elements of vayne's gameplay! And i loooooooove the pictures! I find myself asking people to include pictures WAY too often!

• As troll as it is for me to say this, I think that your section on realistic matchups may be a little too long; Rather than shorten it (because it really is a beautiful section), I think you should make a section right before it, that is a TL;DR section that just has the character list and their pre-6 difficulty

• Make a section on the supports for vayne! You know, make a section with a pithy list of the viable supports for vayne, and then explain which of the supports are strong and which are weak!)
  
  +1,000,000. Don't tell Jai i said this, but i actually like your guide better than hers ;)
  Be that as it may, I can only give you +1 :<
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  -U

Haha, thanks! I should ask someone who is good at playing supports and see their opinions on laning with a Vayne. They would probably have a better answer than whatever I would put up there. & my guide might be slightly worse than hers, since my guide was based off her "How to make a guide", so therefore, I have to give my thanks to her, and also to you for reviewing my guide. Glad you liked it though! +rep & checking out twitch guide now. :3

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You defiantly deserve a higher rating, I think most people are just too glued to maxing Q first.

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There's always Doublelift's build/skill order at the top, if people look at it. Glad you liked it. :)

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Yeah, I liked this guide... But it's only really useable once you read it throughly... I like how you explained how hard it is to go against certain champions... Yeah, Made alot of sense.
This guide deserves more recognition than it has IMO.
Good Job.

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First of all, thanks a lot for this guide !

I tried to play Vayne many times, and it was really hard for me to get better with this champion. I practiced a few times, read guides, and watched a few video, and it really went better ! I love this build, and it really helped me out.

I made a 15/4/11 game after reading this one. Thanks a lot ! :)

+1 !

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I'd say this guyde is really fantastic with the AD carries sectopm and all explanation. All that is missing in AD Carries are Kayle and Teemo, maybe if you would add them, could help alot. =P