urly game
you copyed the hole build from Rainbow Master then he deleted it

urly game
you copyed the hole build from Rainbow Master then he deleted it

The builds are creative, but I disagree with a few options.

1. It is almost never a good idea to rush madred's bloodrazor. You should really leave it as your last item, but you can keep madred's razors (or build it into wriggle's lantern for the free wards and easier last hitting). Madred's Bloodrazor is also countered by magic resistance, leaving it as more of a situational item.

You might also want to look into wit's end as a item on Warwick. Wit's end increases your attack speed, provides bonus magic damage, and provides magic resistance, adding to that tanky-dps role Warwick usually plays. It synergies well with his ultimate whereas something such as infinity edge does not since he is NOT critical hit based.

Spellin errors

good builds, should have a bigger rating

I see a lot of changes going down, and I'll continue to come in visit in lieu of hoping to see a much improved guide. I'll gladly change my vote to a +1 then!

Also you stole the name from Rainbow Master

Spelling errors everywhere

Ty you very much for you honesty and critical view on my guide I will do my best in improving it altho it might take some time until it becomes as beautiful as some of the better guides you can find on Mobafire.

For now i will start on changing the title and redoing the rune section.
About the english, it is not my native language but i'll try my best to improve the grammar and voc.

I hope my build will improve dramatically.

Although the idea of the guide is good, and brings a new way of looking at Warwick, you have several repetitive problems throughout the guide, as well as minor flaws.

The LARGEST problem in the entire guide is punctuation, grammar, and organization. You spelled many words wrong, you have a variety of punctuation errors, and the organization isn't consistent. For example, your runes in your cheat sheet, they should go Mark->Seal->Glyph->Quint as that is the usual way runes are set.

There is also a empty abundance of BBC coding and colors, which really play a role in gaining viewers. Aesthetic appeal is, as much as one can get bored of fixing errors, a large part of any guide getting a lot of views and votes.

A thing I noticed was that you build a Sunfire Aegis late in the game, where it loses effectiveness. At that point, a Randuin's Omen, Frozen Heart, or Force of Nature would be much stronger.

Also, you don't offer an item to replace Spirit's Visage, which is only a mid-game item at best, and falls off late game.

Relative to your grammar/punctuation problem, your title looks unprofessional as well. May I suggest capitalization ?

All in all, a -1 from me as of now, I'll gladly change it to a +1 once you've finished fixing the noted problems, or responding to it.

Ty and implicent i'm already starting to put some bb coding into the guide.