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Tryndamere Build Guide by MR.TROLLINGHAM

AD Carry WHO WILL BE NEXT?! A TOP-LANE TRYNDAMERE GUIDE

AD Carry WHO WILL BE NEXT?! A TOP-LANE TRYNDAMERE GUIDE

Updated on August 17, 2013
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Isolanporzellator (20) | August 22, 2013 3:17pm
Voted +1
^ Comment to Vote is on, forgot about that, +1^^
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Isolanporzellator (20) | August 22, 2013 3:15pm
This is gonna get a long comment, so better take yourself some time.

First of all, I want to mention the positives about this guide. The overall build/runes/masteries etc. seems viable to me (though I love movespeed quints everywhere^^). I also really like the coding (custom table of contents :o) and so on, shows that you know how to write a guide (Yet you should fix that eyeburn color everywhere - just make it plain white and highlight important facts with color).


Next, I will list anything in your guide that I would change or rework (your quotes are marked grey, my recommendations are white, everything is in the order of the guide):

  • "don't downvote me just because you think this is a bad guide." - Why else would someone downvote your guide? This is in fact the only viable reason for downvoting. Remove.
  • "A game changer" - Being a game changer should not be listed in Cons and Pros at the same time, should it?
  • "which is the highest critical strike chance you could get from a passive." - what about Focus? Just "giving the highest whatever" doesn't tell much about an abilities' benefits.
  • "I suggest max this ability first" - it is "I suggest maxing..."
  • "This ability allows you to chase and close-gap your enemy quicklier by slowing the enemy for a great amount." - For grammar: "This ability allows you to close the gap to enemy champions much quicker by slowing them if they are running away."
  • "The amount of damage you could deal from this ability is not that low." - Instead: "This ability can also deal quite a lot of damage."
  • "By immuning to death for 5 seconds" - Instead: "By becoming immortal for 5 seconds"
  • "will greatly increasing" - Instead: "will greatly increase"
  • ""if you health drop to 1, your attack damage would increase"" - Instead: "if your health drops to 1, your attack damage will increase"
  • " Greater Glyph of Attack Speed" - Don't even list this, it's very weak because it's just a secondary stat for glyphs. If you want an alternative, go for Greater Glyph of Cooldown Reduction, because "the use of his abilities is only limited by cooldowns" and you don't get much CDR from Items.
  • "I choose between Damage and Critical Strike" - This way, it sounds like you have to decide between them, but you take both, so leave out the "between" entirely.
  • "I have nothing to say about this tree :(" - Not good, this makes you sound unprofessional. Instead, go for: "I put 9 points in this tree for some health and defensive stats."
  • " it gives you health, damage for a better laning" - "It gives you health and damage for better laning"
  • "Your enemy team don't have a jungler" - "doesn't", the enemy team is singular.
  • "safetiest" - "safest"
  • "could improve your farming" - "can improve your farming"
  • "will greatly increases" - Either "will greatly increase" or "greatly increases"
  • "ignore to unit collision" - "ignore unit collision"
  • "there is no explaining" - "there is no explanation" would be better.
  • "will win every trades" - "will win every trade" or "will win trades"
  • "you could avoid most ganks. If you still confused" - "you can avoid most ganks. If you're still confused"
  • "his/her has already dead." - "he/she is almost dead", I would use almost instead of already, because you will likely be alive if you managed to destroy the turret first^^.
  • " Tryndamere could catch up" - You're kinda obsessed with could, better use "can" - it's a stronger word and sounds better
  • Put the Baron image in a spoiler, it is somehow too big.
  • " it would bring you GREAT REWARD" - same here, use "it will" instead of "it would".
  • "If it isn't, that's mean it is scaling to LATE GAME" - "If it doesn't, that means it comes to late game"
  • I will not mark everyone of these, just replace every "could" in your guide with "can"
  • "since the whole team could easily takes down them, and your team is victory!!!" - "since the whole team can easily take them down, leading to victory."
  • "get nears you", "they already dead.", "it will bring to your team a huge advantage", "you should ward to", "It's everyone responsiblility" - "gets near you", "they are already dead", "it will bring a huge advantage to your team", "you should ward, too", "It's everyones responsibility"

As you can see, I mostly corrected grammar or spelling mistakes. I might not have found all of them, but as I have some fetish for this, I think I found most things. For the content, I agree to most of the written stuff or I don't think I have the qualification to make better recommendations, as I have barely any ranked experience with Tryndamere. It's not an in-depth guide, but it is decent and handy.

One more thing that I should mention: This comment is in no way meant to be insulting because I list your grammar mistakes. It is meant as a help for you to make your guide easier to read, which is a good thing after all, isn't it? And who knows? Maybe it even improved your English skills permanently (e.g. your obsession with could and would even without if-clauses)? I would greatly accept any blame for being perfectionist :).

Overall, my credits to the effort put in that guide - well done, +1 (fix the listed mistakes, though)!
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keno9000 | August 19, 2013 7:44am
Voted +1
tebrik ettim güzel :)
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Knightro (54) | August 17, 2013 9:24pm
Those colors hurt the eyes to read :/

That baron art just takes up space, not a necessity.

"A few endings word" ---> correct grammar is, "A Few ending Words".

The team that got the ace will like basically win the game. Not true in the slightest, and that is an incorrect sentence.

Try not the die ----> Try not TO die


The whole team could easily takes down them ----> take them down.

It's everyone'S responsibility.
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lildrummerdrew (5) | August 17, 2013 8:30pm
Voted -1
Title.
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MR.TROLLINGHAM | August 16, 2013 2:53pm
Okay, so what color should I take ?
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fashionablellama (22) | August 16, 2013 11:01am
I like it, but I think you used too many colours :/

Also, in the abilities section, I think you should put the copied ability things in a spoiler, as it makes it look really messy.

But I like everything else so +1
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Laggermeister (242) | August 16, 2013 9:17am
-1. Green is an eye-unfriendly color for normal text. And get rid of that baron art.
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YeaISupport (30) | August 16, 2013 7:18am
You tried hard, and I respect that.

+1.

Turn C2V on for avoiding troll votes!
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Keltayy (6) | August 16, 2013 7:00am
Awesome guide!
I cant really say anything, except you need to change your colors. It may confuse people abit, and makes it weird to read. :)
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