my first guide so all help is welcome in making the guide your tips i will take in consideration
i have done allot of edditing though don't flame plz that it is not fully finished i am doing my best this only took me a good 2-3 weeks alrdy

First of all, your guide is not finished.

Second of all, I saw in your first chapter, that there will be no item section added, and I saw in your guide itself, that it had no item section.

So... Yeah... Add it! :P

Please do not ever publish guides that aren't finished. Archive it until it's ready for public

Use more coding and enable comment to vote in the meanwhile.