Unlimited mistakes :D. Poor explanations. Everything is ****ing dry as well. I cant force myself into reading it because you have one big wall of text. You dont use any pictures or formating, or, most importantly you didnt use any BB code.
What looks better??

Blood thirster

or

I suggest you add some pictures, the endless wall of text is unbearable.

Fix your grammar bro :D

Thanks Lazukin

Very good build. Guide itself could use improvement, but +1 from me.

Excellent build, although there are countless grammar mistakes.