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'A Friendly Critic' Review Shop

Creator: chisox8 July 14, 2013 7:32pm
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Because I'm very busy ATM, this Shop is bankrupt for the time being... :(




It seems like an oxymoron, I know... But I am, in fact, a friendly critic (or, at least, I try to be).


Hi, I'm Chisox8 (A.K.A. Floron) and I would like to review your guide. I don't take credit for being a pro in League of Legends (I'm not), and I don't take credit for being a senior guide author (I'm not). I have only just written my first guide, and while it is pretty highly rated, I'm no master.

However, I have read tons of guides, and followed tons of guides (testing them, etc.) so I can safely say that I know what makes a good guide.

I am offering my services as a Critic/Guide Reviewer.


Why Choose Me?

  • I know all about guides and what makes a good guide
  • I have written a guide
  • I will never downvote your guide, only give you criticism
  • I'm a friendly guy (or at least I think so...)
  • I genuinely want to help you make your guide awesome!

If you've just made a guide, or even if your guide is a bit older and you want an outsider's honest, in-depth perspective, drop me a PM or a comment in this thread. I'll make sure to look at every guide and give you a review of your guide (as a comment or a PM, whatever you choose).


How to get a Review


Just make a comment on this post (or PM me) with the link to the guide and whether you want your review as a comment on the guide (public) or in a PM (private). You can also add any other comments you want me to know (what you are working on, what you think is not good, what you think is good, etc.)

So, go ahead, give me a shot! I really want to help you make your guide the best it can be!

Guides I have Reviewed:


If I've helped you, feel free to +Rep me!

Check out my Jungle Wukong Guide!
I am also a Guide Critic!
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Oh snap i get to be first

I just made my first guide and i want some people to let me know whats good, whats bad, etc

thanks!

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nocturne-dont-fear-the-darkness-338733


Just send me a PM with comments please, and feel free to vote up or down if you want :P
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LeCuch wrote:

Oh snap i get to be first

I just made my first guide and i want some people to let me know whats good, whats bad, etc

thanks!

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nocturne-dont-fear-the-darkness-338733


Just send me a PM with comments please, and feel free to vote up or down if you want :P


Sounds great, I'll get right on it :)

EDIT: Done!
If I've helped you, feel free to +Rep me!

Check out my Jungle Wukong Guide!
I am also a Guide Critic!
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Mind reviewing my brand new Taric guide?

Id like it in a comment, and please be honest! Anything to improve is worth hearing. :3
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Mind reviewing my brand new Taric guide?

Id like it in a comment, and please be honest! Anything to improve is worth hearing. :3


I'll get right on it!

EDIT: Done, nice job!
If I've helped you, feel free to +Rep me!

Check out my Jungle Wukong Guide!
I am also a Guide Critic!
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Pretty sure you want to review my awesome shaco guide and give me some insight from the perspective of someone who isn't me - that helped me last time i asked for it.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/disregard-creeps-farm-champions-278059
Ty MM and Blood for the sigs :3 | Rammus is comming back - heard it here first!


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I'll take my free upboat! Link in the comments VVV
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Mind reviewing my Zac Guide?
If you found my advice useful, then check out some of my guides!


My Trundle guide
The Troll king: Trundle's Visual/Upgrade Guide

My Skarner guide
The Crystal Vanguard: Skarner Jungle

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