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[quote=Meiyjhe][b][h2]Disclaimer: I kinda don't play league anymore. I can still review for guidewriting in general, but that is about it. If you wish for build related reviews or a review done within a reasonable amount of time, I suggest you visit one of my colleague reviewers.[/h2][/b] [color=#0080ff]Introduction[/color][rule color=#ff0000] Greetings ladies and gentlemen, Here, you can ask for my services regarding guide reviews. Post here in order to get your guide reviewed. Make sure you put the link of the guide you wish to have reviewed within the post, or else I will reject the review request. Also, put in the review scheme you want me to use, or else I will use the standard sins + blessings scheme. [color=#0080ff]The review scheme's[/color][rule color=#ff0000] So if you wonder what my reviews will look like, I will use the famous sins and blessings scheme or the Super Epic Guide Breakdown 5000 (SEGB5000) scheme. The famous sins and blessings scheme will show some pointers that are simply wrong or should improve whereas the SEGB5000 gives an in-depth overview of information that shows what your guide is like and how it can improve. Both schemes focus on presentation, explanation and completion. Due to the fact of my MMR not being skyrocket high, my points of improvements regarding the builds will be less strict. This still means that your build should be good, for I do expect you to explain your choices, especially if the choices are very unusual. With each review that I make I will give you a score in the form of a path. Based on the positive and negative factors I can find in your guide, you will get this certain path that determines what my vote will be for your guide. These are the paths you can get: [color=#ff0000]Path of Exile (<10% in SEGB5000)[/color] No more hope. You will always get a negative vote when following this path. [color=#ff0000]Path of the Infidel (11-25% in SEGB5000)[/color] Means you did a very bad job. You should either archive your guide, or drastically change everything. You will get a negative vote when your guide is above 25% rating or has less than 5 votes on the guide. If the guide rating is already below 25% and has more than 5 votes, the vote will be neutral. [color=#ff0000]Path of Redemption (26-40% in SEGB5000)[/color] The guide was disappointing, but there might still be some hope. You will get a negative vote when following this path if your guide is above 40% rating or has less than 3 votes on the guide. If the guide rating is already below 40% and has more than 3 votes, the vote will be neutral. [color=#ffff00]Path of the Student (41-60% in SEGB5000)[/color] It was a decent guide and there is a noticable potential. You will get no vote when following this path. [color=#00ff00]Path of the Teacher (61-75% in SEGB5000)[/color] Your guide was good enough to make the reader learn the champion better. There is still a lot to improve, but it was good enough. You will get a positive vote when following this path if your guide is below 60% or has less than 3 votes on the guide. If the guide rating is already above 60% and has more than 3 votes, the vote will be neutral. [color=#00ff00]Path of the Successor (76-90% in SEGB5000)[/color] You did a good job. There are some things that still can improve, but it is not affecting the quality of your guide. You will get a positive vote when following this path if your guide is below 75% or has less than 5 votes on the guide. If the guide rating is already above 75% and has more than 5 votes, the vote will be neutral. [color=#00ff00]Path of the Saint (91-100% in SEGB5000)[/color] You did an amazing job, and I have barely any complaints about the guide. The complaints that are there, will be very minor. You can be really proud of yourself and you will always get a positive vote when following this path. Here are also the schemes I use: [spoiler=Sins and blessings] [color=#ff0000]Thy sins[/color] 1. [color=#00ff00]Thy blessing[/color] 1. [color=#0080ff]Result:[/color] [/spoiler][spoiler=Super epic guide breakdown 5000][color=#ff0000]WARNING: This way of reviewing is big and takes a long time. This includes me testing the build after I fully read the guide. Therefore, everyone can only request this type of review twice and only one SEGB5000 will be done per week maximum. Thank you for your understanding. Now on to the scheme:[/color] [anchor=top][table bgcolor=#110011] [tr] [th colspan=2 bgcolor=#220022][columns][nextcol width=95][left][img=https://yt3.ggpht.com/-pcx3ZjxqoUk/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAAAAA/6LUCXP2Tq74/s88-c-k-no/photo.jpg width=95][/left] [nextcol width=605][size=7][color=#eeee00]SUPER EPIC GUIDE BREAKDOWN 5000!!![/color] – [color=#eeee00]Malcolm Graves - Settling the Score[/color][/size][/columns] [/th][/tr] [tr] [th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033] [color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][color=#dddd00]Table of Contents[/color][/size] [color=transparent].[/color] [/th][/tr] [tr] [td width=352 bgcolor=#440044 padding=5][goto=a][color=#cccc00][b]A. Completion[/b][/color][/goto][/td] [td width=352 bgcolor=#440044 padding=5][goto=d][color=#cccc00][b]D. Build quality[/b][/color][/goto][/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colpan=1 bgcolor=#440044 padding=5][goto=b][color=#cccc00][b]B. Written quality[/b][/color][/goto][/td] [td colpan=1 bgcolor=#440044 padding=5][goto=e][color=#cccc00][b]E. Conclusion[/b][/color][/goto][/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colpan=1 bgcolor=#440044 padding=5][goto=c][color=#cccc00][b]C. Structural quality[/b][/color][/goto][/td] [td colpan=1 bgcolor=#440044 padding=5][goto=f][color=#cccc00][b]F. Advice[/b][/color][/goto][/td] [/tr] [/table] [table bgcolor=#110011] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033][color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][anchor=a][color=#dddd00]A. Completion X/5000 [/color][i]-1500 max[/i][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr] [td width=200 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Cheatsheet[/h3][/td] [td width=550 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]Items (including build path, example build, enchantments and trinkets), runes, masteries, summoner spells and skill order.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Build explanations[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]Items, runes, masteries, summoner spells and skill order fully explained. [/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Tactical explanations[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]Early, mid and lategame sections, with a minimum of laning, farming, objectives and teamfights[/td] [/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=transparent][color=transparent].[/color] [size=4][center][goto=top][color=#b0b0b0]BACK TO TOP[/color][/goto][/center][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033][color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][anchor=b][color=#dddd00]B. Written quality Y/X [/color][i]-1500 max[/i][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#dddd00]Individual chapters[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]Here I will explain in detail what I think about the written quality of each chapter. Click on one of the following numbers to skip to a chapter of interest instantly: [goto=1]1[/goto], [goto=2]2[/goto], [goto=3]3[/goto], [goto=4]4[/goto], [goto=5]5[/goto], [goto=6]6[/goto], etc. [goto=end]General[/goto]. [/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][anchor=1][h3][color=#cccc00]1. [/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]My idea on the first chapter. Repeat process untill all chapters are individually reviewed.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][anchor=end][h3][color=#cccc00]Written Quality in General[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]The tldr version of individual chapters [/td][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=transparent][color=transparent].[/color] [size=4][center][goto=top][color=#b0b0b0]BACK TO TOP[/color][/goto][/center][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033] [color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][anchor=c][color=#dddd00]C. Structural Quality Z/Y[/color] [i]-500 max[/i][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][anchor=end1][h3][color=#cccc00]Cheatsheet[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]The tldr version of individual chapters [/td][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][anchor=end1][h3][color=#cccc00]Chapter order[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]The tldr version of individual chapters [/td][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Individual chapters[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]Here I will explain in detail what I think about the structural quality of each chapter. Click on one of the following numbers to skip to a chapter of interest instantly: [goto=1a]1[/goto], [goto=2a]2[/goto], [goto=3a]3[/goto], [goto=4a]4[/goto], [goto=5a]5[/goto], [goto=6a]6[/goto], etc. [goto=end]General[/goto]. [/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][anchor=1a][h3][color=#cccc00]1. [/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]My idea on the first chapter. Repeat process untill all chapters are individually reviewed.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][anchor=end1][h3][color=#cccc00]Structural Quality in General[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]The tldr version of individual chapters [/td][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=transparent][color=transparent].[/color] [size=4][center][goto=top][color=#b0b0b0]BACK TO TOP[/color][/goto][/center][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033] [color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][anchor=d][color=#dddd00]D. Build quality Q/Z[/color] [i]-1500 max[/i][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Analysis[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]What I think of the build.[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Test[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]If I am unsure of the build, I will test it and judge again.[/td] [/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=transparent][color=transparent].[/color] [size=4][center][goto=top][color=#b0b0b0]BACK TO TOP[/color][/goto][/center][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033] [color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][anchor=e][color=#dddd00]E. Conclusion[/color][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Path[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]What path does thee walk on?[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Guide quality[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]tldr of everything. EVERYTHING![/td] [/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=transparent][color=transparent].[/color] [size=4][center][goto=top][color=#b0b0b0]BACK TO TOP[/color][/goto][/center][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=#330033] [color=transparent].[/color] [size=5][anchor=f][color=#dddd00]F. Advice[/color][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]My own tips[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]*Insert words of wisdom here*[/td] [/tr] [tr] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#440044][h3][color=#cccc00]Recommended reads[/h3][/td] [td colspan=1 padding=2 bgcolor=#550055][color=#bbbbbb]Some guides that might help you out to become better[/td] [/tr] [tr][th colspan=2 bgcolor=transparent][color=transparent].[/color] [size=4][h5]Good luck and do not forget to [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/well-well-look-who-is-starting-a-review-shop-22228]vote[/url]! Table format is inspired by Foxy Riven's [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/foxys-tables-guide-grasping-the-table-coding-basics-392523]table coding guide[/url]. Any questions? PM me![/h5][/size] [color=transparent].[/color][/th][/tr][/table][/spoiler] [color=#0080ff]Reviews so far:[/color][rule] [spoiler=people that requested Super epic guide breakdown 5000 so far][list][*] ToxicCashew x1 [*] [color=#ff0000]Emikadon x2[/color] [*] IPodPulse x1 [*] Pallis123 x1 [*] FoxyRiven x1 [*] Re4XN x1[/list][/spoiler] If you want to see some sins and blessings reviews which I already have done, there are plenty of guides that I already have reviewed, you can find some from the posters down below. [color=#0080ff]Requirements[/color][rule] Unlike other review shops, I do not ask you to fill in a certain scheme, but there are certain things that I ask of you before you request a review. If you do not comply with the requirements, the review will be rejected: [list] [*] As mentioned in the introduction, I expect a link to your guide (+optional; the review scheme you want me to use) [*] The guide that is requested is updated (your guide needs to be "fresh") [*] The guide that is requested is not already reviewed twice by me (yes, rereviews are possible). [*] The author did not request a SEGB5000 more than 2 times. [*] The guide has a minimum of 5 chapters and contains a cheatsheet. [*] Patience. This is still a free service thus I ask you to respect my review schedule. If you want to know when my next review sprint is, see the top of this post. [/list] [color=#0080ff]In return[/color][rule] If you wonder what you have to do in return for my review, you will not have to do anything. I don't ask you to review my own guides, to give me +rep or whatever, it is completely free. If you got my review, I will ask if you want to vote on this thread whether you liked my review or not. It is not necessary, but I find it fun to see how many people found my reviews useful. (A thank you after a big ass SEGB5000 is also welcome though) If you have any questions, complaints or whatsoever, feel free to post down below aswell or PM me so I can help. Thank you -Meiyjhe[/quote]

[quote=OTGBionicArm]Guide link is in my sig. get to work Bananaman, before it is time to crash the veteran's party![/quote]

[quote=Satella]A review on my [icon=Riven size=16][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-competitive-mid-lane-riven-guide-294902/]Riven Guide[/url] would be awesome, but please say "Thy sins"! Thy = Your Thou = You "Thou sins" = You sins = ??? = ASDJALFDKJDLFHLJSDHFLJHFDKSJHFKSDHF EDIT> Actually lemme make some changes first, I haven't published yet. Will edit again when I'm done. EDIT2> Done. Go wild![/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe][quote=Satella] Thy = Your Thou = You "Thou sins" = You sins = ??? = ASDJALFDKJDLFHLJSDHFLJHFDKSJHFKSDHF [/quote] Fine, you win :P Changed format[/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe]So far, no baddies yet :D Keep the requests coming :D[/quote]

[quote=FalseoGod]EVERYTHING. NOW. DO IT NOW.[/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe]God, so many guides D: But I reviewed them all! Muhahaha[/quote]

[quote=Janitsu][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/-151019]I know you love me, I know you review, just click this link, and I'll be happyyyyyy[/url][/quote]

[quote=sirell]Possibly include links to the guides you already reviewed?[/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe]Fine D:[/quote]