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Creator: BakaGirl December 4, 2011 10:12am
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I know how hard it is to get reviews on your guide when it gets lost in the 'New Guides' section, hereby I'll be here to proofread and review your guide. I will never post a negative review, however I can choose not to review your guide if I look at it and it's full of 'text sp3@k'. :I

(If you find me even a bit helpful, rep is appreciated but not necessary.)

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Summoner Level: You have to be level 30.
Ability to accept criticism: Like I said, I will never post a negative review, however if you're building your champion completely wrong, I will raise my hand and say something about it.

(I own every champion except for a few 6300s that came out these past few months, starting from Leona.)
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Reviewed Guides / Guides I'm about to Review

+ 1 Xiron's "Wukong - U No Steal Bananas!"
"Excellently organisation. No big spelling mistakes that I feel the need to comment on. (Except you spelt 'jungling' as 'jungleling '.)

One thing: Heal does not counter Ignite, it's the other way around. :P The "counter" to ignite is more health.

Also you should organize the 'Tips' section because it's a giant wall of text. Maybe bullet each point?

Overall, good guide! :)"

+ 1 Kirluu's "Garen - The Unbeatable Solo Top"
"It looks wonderful, however there are a few areas where it's just gigantic walls of texts (Masteries, Laning Phase and Teamfights section... etc..) I'm not sure how to organize it but perhaps putting in a bulleted format might help (Or more spaces in between?).

No large spelling errors that I noticed. Did you spell check it or are you just naturally able to type well? :P

Also Tobuscus references are full of win. ^-^

+1!"

+1 Fictionized's "Shyvana - Jungling and Solo Drakes"
"VERY nice. The organization is top notch, no grammar/spelling mistakes that I noticed from what I skimmed through. I really love the flowchart and jungle map (although you're going to have a draw a big X over Ninja Tabi now :P)

However I don't play Shyvana so I can't critique you on your build or masteries. But I'll just agree with the others.

Excellent job. +1"

x abzilla's "Ryze - The Mana Hungry Mage"

x marisi's "Nocturne - So OP, Riot should nerf him

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If only my guide was done :(

Lovin the sig Xiao! <3
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Wanna read my Wukong-Guide?
Want some MOAR feedback!

BTW: Why is erry1 doing a "I'll read ur guide"-Thread?

Look for everything you can find, spelling checks and so on.
Link in my signature.
Thanks to Joxuu!

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Xiron wrote:

Wanna read my Wukong-Guide?
Want some MOAR feedback!

BTW: Why is erry1 doing a "I'll read ur guide"-Thread?

Look for everything you can find, spelling checks and so on.
Link in my signature.


Done and +1 for you :U
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Hey, I'd love for you to take a look at my guide :)

Garen Guide

Thanks ^^
Check out my comprehensive guide for Jax !!
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Make sure to hit that +Rep button if I helped you out, and you feel I deserve it! :)
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http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shyvana-jungling-and-solo-drakes-145666

Anything you want to focus on, do it. I'd like a full review.

Cheers,
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Hey! Can u review mine?

Lvl 30 summoner
Can take criticism

Ryze, the mana hungry Mage (detailed guide)

Thank you.

Click +Rep if you thought I was helpful please! Also check out my Ryze build!
I will Ryze to the occasion... hur hur
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You shouldn't just upvote everyone that posts here. Make sure the guide isn't bad at least.
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Searz wrote:

You shouldn't just upvote everyone that posts here. Make sure the guide isn't bad at least.


For the love of god yes.

If the guide isn't good, don't upvote it then other players think its good and its really not. Sometimes being truthful is better than telling someone its good.
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