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Hello everybody :)!

So, since I have much free time, I decided to offer help with guides, I can help with things like screenshots, BB - code, videos, maybe even tell my opinion about your guide.

So, if you want my help, just simply reply to this thread or send a personal message to me. Please explain well enough, what kind of help do you need and when you are online. You can also send me an email (janitsu@gmail.com), so I'll check it as soon as I get to my computer ^^


Hope to hear about you soon ^^

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Hey Janitsu :)
I was wondering if you could read an unpublished guide of mine and tell me your thoughts (it's actually archived)
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Sure, if you give the, I will have a look at it and tell what I think ^^

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Best of luck to you mate :)

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Best of luck to you mate :)



Thanks you ^^
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@MrCuddowls

I had a look at it and I think I'll just list "Pro et Contra" :)


Pros:
- Nice overlay
- You explain runes, items and gameplay
- You have quote from my favorite prosaist ^^
- You have pretty subheadings ^^

Cons:
- I can't read the text very well because I have hereditary eyedisease
- Sometimes you are too brief

What I would recommend:
- Make the font bigger
- A little about warding
- Take screenshots about warding, pro tips for abilities etc.
- use the code from this and make table of contents

I'm glad you asked my help ^^

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@KingPudding

Well, I think you have mistakes in your coding, so if I could get the code from following sections:

III. Pro's and Con's
IV. Runes


also smaller pictures for example in the masteries section. You probably use
Code:
[icon=hardiness size=55]
whilst I think
Code:
[icon=hardiness size=30]
or
Code:
[icon=hardiness size=20]
would do

But I like your guide overall, it is clear, and you explain things well, only thing that bothers me, is the coding. It kinda makes your guide look ugly at some parts. Too big icons or for example the "Pros and Cons" section don't look so good imo. So, if you can send the code from those parts to me, I could try to fix it.
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Ok I made the pro's and con's smaller. I will though decrease the size of the masteries once I get a chance to do so.
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