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Sir Spank's Review thread of Spank

Creator: SirSpankAlot November 6, 2011 2:53am
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Heya Spank, I'm wondering if you could give me some constructive criticism on my guide. I want to improve it but my very low knowledge in making guides, bbcode, and grammar is beyond me.

Thanks in advance!

Summoner Level: 27
Post Count (at time of request): 76
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes (I tried as much as I can)
Read jhoijhoi's Guide Making Guide: Yes
Champion of Guide you would like Reviewed: Fizz (yeah... another Fizz)
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to improve it and I want some harsh feedbacks and whatnot, I'm not a sensitive person so I need to do better.
What I'd like you to focus on: The 'completeness' of the guide, see if it's all-rounded and better than the average
Guide Link: Fizz - The Amphibian Jungler
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Did the reviews , goodjob dudes :X.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!

Check out my guide on Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard
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Spank is awesome!
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Spank is awesome!


This guy deserves an oscar.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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Spank is awesome!


This guy deserves an oscar.


I deserve one for double quoting an oscar winner and subject.
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I would like a re-review:

Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 97
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Read jhoijhoi's Guide Making Guide: YES
Champion of Guide you would like Reviewed: Katarina
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: made some changes since your last review (many changes - mostly visual)
What I'd like you to focus on: General, if there are any mistakes, misdirections etc.
Guide Link: Katarina Du Couteau: The Sinister Blade
Thanks to The_Nameless_Bard for the sig
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Did the review , many improvements yet it can still improve. Please check my review for further info kusoku.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!

Check out my guide on Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard
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I've read your review and I appreciate your feedback :D
Full answer: Answer
Thanks to JhoiJhoi for the sig
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I think you forgot a [/list] after the first list. The parts after that first list are indented from that.

I don't mind you using the format or putting me as an additional reviewer. Thanks!
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Thanks bro , I thought it was a bug xd.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner

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