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Can`t see my guide.

Creator: Uzumaki November 23, 2011 1:41pm
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Uzumaki
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Hi there, i created a guide today, cant find it in "Newest guides" or in Kennen guides.

here is the link http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kennen-the-fulminant-shinobi-152525

well
what is that?^^
and how can i put it to newest for people saw that and vote?:)
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It's not long enough.

Add more characters.

That's all.
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U mean add more characters in menu "my team" ?
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No. If I was a new Kennen player, which I kind of am, I'm going to learn very little from your guide.

Add more to the guide. Be more descriptive. Add why you pick X item over Y.
Explain why you use X/X/X mastery choice over Z/X/W mastery choice.
Tell why you take the runes you do.

Put in tips, tricks, things to do to save your life.

Advanced things that took you games to learn that have saved your life numerous times.

Work on the grammar and use "you" instead of "U".

Work on spelling out words and add icons like Zhonya's Hourglass instead of "Use yur hourglass."

Stuff like that really separates a good guide from a mediocre one.

EDIT: About your grammar...
If English is not your main language, and you don't know someone who speaks it fluently, please write the guide in your native language. It makes it a bit easier for people to rate it correctly other than "Bad grammar I -1"


Thank you to jhoijhoi for the sig, and all the dividers in the guide.

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Thank you.

I will work on it.

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