Hey! I'm Katasandra, one of the local Scouts. I have come here to review your guide, not sure if you asked me or if I suggested it to you, but here it is! I'll try my best to give pointers on what areas you can improve your guide on. I hate just saying 'this isn't good', and I'll try my best to give advice on how I would improve certain things (as if it were my own guide).

How does it work:I'll go into three 'main' topics: Content, Language/Writing and Coding/Visuals. I believe all three are core ingredients of a guide. Just knowing your champ is not enough. You also have to make sure you can actually convey all this precious knowledge to your readers!I'll specify these categories as well as some subcategories and for that I'll use the following rating system:

Content

>Cheatsheet: Needs some work

The title of the first rune page got gobbled up by the numbers. I strongly recommend removing the ELEC & INSPI part of the titles (and from all other titles if you're at it) as it doesn't add any information whatsoever. Personally I'm also strongly against mentioning setups you don't recommend (especially in the cheat sheet), so I'd yeet the fleet page out of there.

The title trend continues at the summoner spells. It's a lot more efficient to use titles to partly explain what the summoner spells are used for rather than naming the summoner spells (which again, is quite useless).

As for the items, I recommend reordering them so that example build #1 is grouped with the rest. It's also not that obvious that Cloth Armor and Doran's Shield are starting items too, so either change the title or use the "set group" feature.

The first base block is okay at first; but this one really needs some notes due to the sheer amount of options. The same is true for the situational items. In my opinion there's always more room for notes! As a last note on the items, the title of example build #4 (if lack of CC) is ambiguous, as it is not clear whether your team or the enemy team is lacking CC.

>Setup (Runes/Items/Summoner spells): It's alright

The runes and summoner spells are alright. I think the items section needs some work though. Although the terminology is not set, 'core items' are often referred to as items you need in >90% of your games. I'm unsure if this is the terminology you use, since then your core items would fill up an entire build. It feels a little more like 'standard build'?

I'm also a bit confused by the Mejai's Soulstealer description, I've never ever encountered a phrase such as 'I would look for a Mejai angle' so I would refrain from using that.

>Champion (Abilities/Tips&Tricks/Combo's): Needs some work

This is simultaneously an easy and a hard section to write. Easy because as a champion main you know all these things. Hard because as a champion main you do not realize that a lot of "instinctive" things are not that obvious to new players. I think there's a wealth of information locked into this part of a champion and one should spend sufficient time going through all of it.

You definitely fell into the trap of rushing ahead. You give the results and what you should do with certain mechanics right away rather than explaining the reason behind them. To give a concrete example: you mention the autoattack - Nether Blade combo and then spiral into how great it is for trading; however you neglect to mention that Nether Blade is an AA reset.

I feel like you could take some more time explaining the intrinsic workings of the abilities and what kind of special properties they have (that aren't listed in the description - think of flash buffering R). Like I said, the section just feels a bit rushed right now, as if what Kassadin can do isn't that important. I think this is also partly caused by the way you phrase things.

Lastly, something that's missing in the guide: combo's. Every. Single. Champion. Has. Combo's. Surely you don't faceroll your keyboard in some random way? Again, these can seem very intuitive, obvious or trivial to you, but they are not to others. Having concrete examples and explaining where/when combo's can be used are extremely helpful and is something that really takes guides beyond the level of mimicking the lolwiki page.

Also a bit random, but after looking at this section for a sizeable amount of time, I am quite annoyed by the GIFS. Although I love these, since you can show so much with em, I strongly dislike having your name plastered over 1/4th of the window.

>Gameplay: It's alright

Gameplay is the trickiest section. There are many depths of information you can achieve (from purely champion specific tips to sections covering general info about gameplay). I definitely do not think covering all the possible gameplay information is necessary for a good guide; but you'll need to cover champion specific things at the very least. You did so on a basic level, but you can do much more.

To take a concrete example: in the late-game parts you say "Ones where you can impact 5 vs 5 fights and actually carry with your burst.". You as a Kassadin main will know what to do! However I as a Kassadin noob interpret the statement as the following: "I can randomly jump in the middle of the enemy team without thought and murder all of them by myself!" Question for you: is that actually true, or are there some more things I should do...?

Code/Visuals

> Execution: Pretty good

A few things I'd look into: first and foremost I think you should decrease the size of the icons in the items section. These images are not exactly high resolution and having them this large just looks kinda bad. There's also something weird going on in the indented parts of the rune section. The it seems the icons are not centered but stacked on the left side of their cells (which throws me off since usually everything is nice and centered. How to fix this is up to you, but it looks like increasing the width of the column with the icon to 120px and centering the content will do the trick.

>Cohesion (same coding style used throughout guides): Pretty good

Overall consistent, the only exception are the rune shards. Here the suddenly centered (eww, I hate centered stuff overall) appearance is very different from the rest of the guide.

>Theme of guide (color scheme): Godlike

Writing/Language

One detail you need to be careful about is your audience: I know you're playing at a high dia-masterish level. However your audience is not. Especially stuff like "tempo" or "spacing" can be completely abstract and unknown to your readers. When reading through your guide, I completely understand what you mean, but I cannot help but feel that there will be other people reading your guide that genuinely have no clue.

This is actually the hardest part of writing a guide, because you as a "master" must go back and try to understand what the "noobs" don't know. If you guess too high then half your readers will not understand what you mean and if you guess too low your readers might get bored and skip parts. Right now I think you're on the 'too high' part of the spectrum though.

>Spelling/grammar: Godlike

>Paragraphs/Sentence length: Godlike

Overall thoughts

I'd say your guide is semi-decent, but requires some attention (the most prevalent being cheatsheet and abilities). Besides that I think you should try to think of what your audience is for this guide and try to adjust the level of information to that audience. After all, how are you going to convey information if you don't know who you are talking to? ;)