You never explained why these champs should be played in this way, like how and why are they effective/strong when played in this manner. Also your items and build/skill choices go without explanation. It encourages users to be cookie cutter in how they build their champs. If they see AP, then they build this, not knowing why they should build this. It doesn't help the reader to know overall why this item is effective in that scenario.

Also grammar/spelling check. We don't really care if your girlfriend has huge watermelons. Will re-review when you update this.