Does this look better? And please rate it

just something to help you make your guide look better, you could use bbcoding. You should check jhoijhoi's guide on how to make a guide as it gives a great demonstration on how to make your guide look better.

Your guide provides essential information but a majority of people will not read it since it is a chunk of text. Which is actually a pity.

This is really in-depth and gives great pointers.