Thank you for the review! Very detailed gameplay scenarios is definitely something I want to do at some point. I'm recording some games now just for that, will get around to it soon. Detailing the laning phase is definitely something I can add in.

I'm going to rework the runepage as I've moved away from scaling health seals against heavy AD myself. That being said, flat HP mathematically gives more eHP than armour seals to in the early game.

I can definitely go into some of the finer innate points of his gameplay, however. I think a lot of it is second nature to me so it didn't occur to me to write it down.

Cheers
Ben / Adept

Hello, you requested a review from my review service thread, found here

I uploaded my markup of your guide as a PDF. I hope that's okay.


A pretty good start to your guide. If I were to recommend three things that you could change to significantly improve your guide, I'd say that it would be the following:

• Teach your readers the science behind landing Q's. You tell them that it's possible to land good Qs, but you never teach them EXACTLY how to do just that.
• Improve that laning phase section. Often times, I can stomp my opponents mid lane, just because my opponent doesn't respect my zone, or because I can weave in spells every now and then to whittle my opponent down. With how your laning phase section is written right now, your readers can get whittled down and zoned by people that have my sort of aggressive playstyle. I'd like you to really teach through example (i'd say video footage of your own gameplay would be most helpful) and REALLY show your readers how you maintain the fine balance between lane pressure, and safety.
• I'd like you to really teach your readers how to position to get a good ulti down. If your readers can get a 4 man, full channel ulti on your opponents, your guide will have taught your reader how to single handedly win a team fight. I'd like you to upload some pictures of your own gameplay that really show your reader when/where is really the best time to ulti.

If you have any questions about my review, feel free to respond to my post here, or PM me if for some reason i'm taking a while to get back to you. I hope you got something out of my review. If you did, a +rep really means a lot to me! :) If you would like to submit your guide for a re-review, just post again on my review thread and i'll look into it.

Thanks a lot for your time,
Michael

I'm glad you guys like it. Just put out an update with a new build and rune page and done some general housekeeping. I intend to add some serious new content regarding matchups and synergies in the coming weeks.

:) nice 1!

This build rocks, thank you sir :)

Glad to hear it :D

Doing really well with Vel Koz because of this guide. Thanks

Thank you! :)


I've double checked them several times, not sure why they're broken. I need to get round to finding some other BBcode layout for them I think.

Hmm, wonder why your item build icons are broken? Are the items spelled correctly?

Wow this helped me really i acually bought velkoz cause of this quide and i think u have right he is the (one of the) best Mage in the mid lane

Thank you! :)