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great work :D

Not going to -1 your guide, though I'm an average Talon player, and many times I find it a lot better to simply burst down my enemies, rather than trying to survive a teamfight, (as stated in some other guide)"Talon is an assassin, and therefore, if you build him with defensive items you're doing something wrong" I won't say that your build is bad, though i'd like a very good reason for you to choose defense over offense (Specially for a warmog's, really, that is one hell of a pricy item... and worse, it's pricy and it doesn't fit Talon's role, by that I mean, you're having an extra expense that would normally be rated down...)

Also, one more thing, Did you just put Brutalizer because it felt like a more viable option in terms of money or you really don't think that Youmuu's is worth the price? I'm NOT going to rate your guide yet, I'll decide my rating based on what you answer me, thanks in advance ^^

I made a mistake lol

It should be 'This item is often complained about', I said 'this is item is...' (edited that now)
No idea why, sorry :|

btw it's thanks to Wayne3100, not for :P


@ valeforixd
Mind telling him what build he should use and why this build is bad? I'm not a Talon player so I didn't comment too much on his build, but at least give him some constructive criticism to work with :|


EDIT: I see valeforixd has removed his post, so now you have a downvote without an actual good explanation :|
Keep your chin up, good luck on reaching a higher rating

I like it.
Normally I would advise someone to use multiple chapters/sections, but as it says in the introduction this guide may be short but it covers the basics.

Your current choices are well-explained and I really like the overall layout of the guide, however I do have a few tips to improve the guide:

• You list no alternative runes and/or items, I would add some.
• Your ability sequence section describes what combo you should use when playing Talon. That's not what the Ability Sequence section should contain in terms of information, however. Use this section to explain why you max your Rake first. What makes it better than the other choices? What happens if you level it, does the damage increase, does the cooldown decrease, what about the mana cost? What do you level it for?
  Show players that choosing Rake is the best choice.
• Use the information about which combo you should often use in the gameplay section. Either use it in your current 'teamfights' chapter or make a new chapter called 'Laning Phase' in which you describe whether Talon should play agressive in lane or not and in which you mention the combo.
• There are still some mistakes in the guide. For instance:
  
  • 'This item is often under complain' should be 'This item is often complained about'
  • 'and has so short cooldown that you should always use it on fight when possible' should be 'and has such a short cooldown that you should always use it in fights if possible'
  
  Read the guide again and see if you encounter more mistakes, they're generally not hard to find.

Overall a good job, +1