i would recommend a spell check would make things alot clearer otherwise. a good guide (minus the title... didnt much like that part....)

I don't think many of you are grasping the idea of this build very well (although I am taking everything into consideration) the reason I get both LW and Brutalizer early is because if you are doing what you're supposed to in lane (demolishing it) they WILL be buying armor which makes both of these viable choices, thing is though people tend to look at a build on paper and say nope doesn't work instead of trying it in a game. I've used this many times and it has rarely failed me, but maybe I've just been getting lucky. I do have something to edit on this guide either way.

The Brutalizer and Last Whisper clash terribly. Either postpone LW (probably a good idea, they won't have a huge amount of armor that early) or skip Brut entirely.

There we go, I tried to fix as many things as I could. As for Duff, I added FoN to the Other items, personally I find Banshee's Stacking with Atma's is a bit better. But its really all preference. I also made some icons bigger, not to mention took out the repetition.
Enjoy!

Not only is The Brutalizer and Last Whisper together inefficient, but you rush Last Whsiper. That's not good at all. That is the last item you want to rush. If you wan't faster damage you might as well rush either Infinity Edge or just move Last Whisper behind Banshee's Veil.

The guide looks ok however when you BBCode you add an extra name, making it look a bit silly. This is what your doing:
Which gave you Pantheon Pantheon.

To fix this, either remove the extra name behind the square brackets, or if you wanted the actual picture:
Which get's you

You can adjust size number and change the name to the thing you want to describe. This will give you bigger size pics that Chubby talked about. The guide is still nice, so I'll give you +1.

+1 overall good coding and text

think you should vary with your sizes of pics. they all look so small o.O. for instructions, check out jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide! like how you did the matchups section, but i think an adequate short explanation for each champion you mention should be added. for masteries, use jhoijhoi's layouts. they make the guide look much more appealing. also turn on require comment to vote.

keep up the good work!

IMO FoN > BV.