When some people are confronted with a guide that they have to vote on it makes people shy away from it because they don't have anything to say. All the guides that seem to get swept of into a corner are the ones that require commenting, fact of the matter is people go by they motto of "F@ck Effort", it's when your guide gets a little higher up that people will take the time to comment, find things to give feedback on and all. That said, votes without feedback do suck, because you want to make your guide better and better.

i have to disagree with Wanderer1. all comment to vote does is ensure you get feedback. IMO, votes are mostly useless without feedback, especially seeing that this is your first guide/post. i'm only gonna adress the ad sion since i really despise ap sion. so ask sombody else for feedback on that. i'd replace the one Phantom Dancer with a Frozen Mallet Force of Nature Warmog's Armor something like that. and definently get some magic resist in there. generally you will want to have explinations of gameplay, skills, skill usage, ect. (everything but jungling that you see on the side.) any q's just pm me, i'll be on for a while still then i'll be on tomorrow.

best of luck!

Oh and clean up that grammar!

Okay, 2 big things, GREAT guide, like the items and all but Get rid of the comment to vote That scares off a lot of potential votes and make your guide shine less then it should! And 2nd is this, get more stuff in there! get some pictures, get some stuff on his abilities and make it look cleaner so people will be able to read it with ease and enjoy it! I like it but still improve it if you want it to go anywhere!

Very short and very 'blocky' try to add indents lists etc...

Use [Name of the item, Champion, Spell] or [icon=Name of it] to add images of summoner spells and items. Works only low elo.