please don't do another guide the build is troll just by looking at the runes my god why do you have 5% crit ? do you honestly think that's good ? i suggest you get a higher elo before giving builds buddy :)
p.s if you plan to tell me you know lucian keep in mind im a gold (almost plat) adc main with lucian as my pocket pick with 250k on him
have a nice day !