Pretty in depth guide. I am not really a fan of the focus on damage output, but the items you suggest are all good itelia items. I might try this sometime soon. Upvote for good effort and because i haven't tested yet.

i think maxing Equilibrium Strike is actually the best way to go, longer stun or slow is more helpful. You don't really put Hiten Style into action until you head into a team fight. 1v1 situations dont really require Hiten Style as much well at least not a higher level. A longer stun/slow also allows your jungler to gank more succesfully. It is just my preference.

You preference is different and I respect that but you really need to explain why.