With this build you take 3/3 crit damage but you only have .66% crit chance. Cdr glyphs? Cdr is useless for Akali. Health seals are probably a better choice considering you can't dodge abilities. If you were to replace your glyphs with ap glyphs 1 of your seals with 1 ap seal, your quins with 2 ap 1 ad, and pick up the 3/3 attack damage talents rather than the crit damage talents you could start at lvl 1 with a doran's blade and both disciplines(giving you more health than your quins currently do plus 4% lifesteal plus the 10%spell vamp). Also since you use exhaust why not drop that .66% crit chance and pick up the improved exhaust giving you increased duration as well as magic resistance and armor reduction? In the defense tree I would also max out the magic resistance rather than the armor, most of the damage you take is going to be from abilities not auto attack(with few exceptions). You might also want to consider rushing Rylai's first to make it harder for people to escape you and also to give you that little extra bit of survivability. Take your 2nd rank of mark at level three as well, rather than Slash, to increase your early game burst(slash is awesome for additional aoe damage but at such low level without any gear it isn't really that beneficial and you wont be in team fights this early anyway)