Hey! Things are looking a lot better since i first came here nice work!

Although i have a few more things you might want to add

Two separate sections about runes and masteries you can use these two links to help you out
http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/rune-page-planner

Simply copy the permalink into your guide and it will appear very nciely

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/mastery-tree-planner

copy the permalink into your guide and your masteries will look nicer than ever!

Next... I suggest having other possible summoner spells

Also add a section about what to do in teamfights and about Akali's combo

It could be much better. the lack of BBcode is what really bugs me, also the chapters that involve skins and Akali's relations with other champs have really nothing to do with a guide. Also with your items try to explain what items you should be going for and what order to get them.

Try to go more in depth with some of your chapters. Summoner spells for examples is really weak. Try talking about which spells go great with Akali and talk about spells that don't go so great with her.

Hello! I think that you need to learn some BBcode

For example rather than saying Akali do this Akali akali without spaces...

A quick google search of how to use bbcode would help you tremendously!

Another thing is the item section. Further explain what items to purchase. In your section you list the stats they give you but not when/in what builds the item fits in and what role it helps you play.


Add a typical build in your cheatsheet and mark it as core items that way people viewing your guide will know the ideas you are trying to convey without having to read your entire guide.

The abilities and skins chapters are a bit unnecessary although if you would like to keep them i suggest changing your abilities section so that is shows how to use the abilities properly.

Knowing akali you might want to dedicate a chapter to runes and one for masteries.

Again knowing akali i suggest talking more about how to use Twilight Shroud and how to properly use your combos before level 6 and after level 6

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Seriously though BBCode is a big part of Mobafire guides. Google some guides!

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